Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was child especially I remember I have a bike when I was I was attending the kindergarten.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are popular in Korea. Whenever you visit the Hangang River, you can see a lot of people riding a bike in the line.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and add one specific supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give a brief specific memory. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, I remember riding it to kindergarten every day, and my parents put a small bell on it so I could alert others. It was a bright red bike with training wheels, which made me feel confident learning to ride.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: Keep the answer direct, use a linking phrase to add a specific reason or example, and use more natural collocations (e.g., “popular in Korea,” “along the Han River”). Avoid minor grammar errors and make the example more precise.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Korea. For example, along the Han River you often see many people cycling for exercise and leisure, especially on weekends, because there are extensive bike paths and rental services.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child especially I remember I have a bike when I was I was attending the kindergarten.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I especially remember that I had a bike when I was attending kindergarten.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past-time expressions 'when I was' and omits the article 'a' before 'child' and 'kindergarten'. Use past tense 'had' because the question asks about a past situation. Add 'a' before 'child' and remove the repeated 'I was'. Also add 'that' or punctuation to separate ideas for clarity. Suggestion: consistently use past tense for past events and include necessary articles. Grammar problem type ID: 6

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in Korea. Whenever you visit the Hangang River, you can see a lot of people riding a bike in the line.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in Korea. Whenever you visit the Hangang River, you can see a lot of people riding bikes in a line.

The phrase 'riding a bike in the line' uses incorrect article and preposition. Because 'a lot of people' implies plural, use the plural 'bikes'. The prepositional phrase should be 'in a line' to indicate they ride in formation. Alternatively, 'along the river' could be used. Also maintain plural agreement between 'people' and 'bikes'. Grammar problem type ID:11

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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