Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar and use clear linking. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and singular/plural agreement (e.g., "bike" not "them") and avoid repetition like "broke down" twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My uncle bought it for me when I was five, and I rode it almost every day until I was about ten. Because I used it so often, I was really sad when it finally broke down, as it reminded me of many happy afternoons playing outside.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (singular/plural, articles), use linking words for coherence, and provide one specific example or brief comparison. Replace vague phrases ("reduce so much cost") with precise reasons ("low cost and health benefits").

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. In many suburbs, people use bikes to commute to local shops and markets, which reduces fuel consumption and saves money. Moreover, cycling is healthier and less polluting than driving, so it is a practical choice for short trips.

× My uncle bought it for me since I was five years old and I've been using them for at least five years until I turned around 10 or 11 before the bike broke down.

✓ My uncle bought it for me when I was five years old, and I used it for at least five years until I was around ten or eleven, before the bike broke down.

The sentence mixes past simple with present perfect continuous incorrectly and uses 'since' with a past reference; 'since' plus a past point requires present perfect if continuing to present, but the action ended in the past. Use past simple ('used') and a past time expression ('when I was five') to keep tense consistent. Also replace 'they' with 'it' to match singular 'bike' and change 'turned around 10 or 11' to 'was around ten or eleven' for natural phrasing.

× I've been using them for at least five years until I turned around 10 or 11 before the bike broke down.

✓ I used it for at least five years until I was around ten or eleven, before the bike broke down.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'bike' is singular; use 'it'. Also the tense and time expressions should be past simple, not present perfect continuous, because the action ended in the past.

× I was pretty sad when it broke breakdown because it has so many memories with me.

✓ I was pretty sad when it broke down because I have so many memories of it.

'Broke breakdown' is incorrect repetition; use the phrasal verb 'broke down'. 'It has so many memories with me' is ungrammatical: people have memories of things, so use 'I have so many memories of it'. Keep past feeling 'I was pretty sad' and present perfect 'I have so many memories' is acceptable because the memories continue to the present.

× I think bike are quite popular in my country because most people in the suburb use bike to travel around their town and shopping in the market, which is quite good for the environment since it doesn't require any fuels and it reduce so much cost.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country because most people in the suburbs use bikes to travel around their towns and to go shopping in the market, which is quite good for the environment since they don't require any fuel and they reduce costs significantly.

Several singular/plural mismatches: 'bike are' should be 'bikes are'; 'suburb' should be plural 'suburbs' if speaking generally; 'use bike' -> 'use bikes'; 'town' -> 'towns' to match general reference. Also 'fuels' is usually uncountable 'fuel', and 'reduce so much cost' is awkward; use 'reduce costs significantly'. Pronouns should agree in number ('they' for plural bikes).

× ...use bike to travel around their town and shopping in the market...

✓ ...use bikes to travel around their towns and to go shopping in the market...

Parallel structure requires 'to' before both verbs: 'to travel' and 'to go shopping'. Use 'go shopping' rather than just 'shopping' after 'use bikes to'. Also ensure plural nouns match the general statement ('towns').

× ...which is quite good for the environment since it doesn't require any fuels and it reduce so much cost.

✓ ...which is quite good for the environment since they don't require any fuel and they reduce costs significantly.

Subject-verb agreement: when referring to 'bikes' (plural), use plural verbs 'they don't require' and 'they reduce'. Also 'require any fuels' is incorrect because 'fuel' is uncountable here; use 'fuel'.