Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần rõ ràng hơn, dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và câu chủ đề rõ ràng; tránh lặp từ và sửa phát âm/đánh vần sai (bike, pie, buy). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể theo trật tự logic, dùng liên từ để nối ý. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề về việc có xe đạp, sau đó mô tả một kỷ niệm cụ thể (ai, khi nào, việc gì xảy ra) với 1–2 câu bổ sung, tổng không quá 4-5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. One day my mother gave me some money to buy food, so I rode my bike to the shop. On the way I had a small accident and dropped the food, but it became a funny memory I still remember.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng số liệu hoặc so sánh rõ ràng và thì phù hợp; sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (convenient, small towns, motorbikes). Sử dụng liên từ để nối lý do và mệnh đề đối chiếu (however, but). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống nơi xe đạp vẫn được dùng và nêu nguyên nhân chuyển sang xe máy.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in small towns where they are convenient and cheap. However, most people now prefer motorbikes because they are faster and better for longer distances.

× Yes, I remember that when I was little, I have a little Pike and in one day, but in one day when my mom is give me giving me some money for buy food, I ride my pie to buy food and Oh my God, I have a sign and and well, my buy well is a shambling tacos. It's very it's a little story in my life.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was little, I had a small bike. One day, when my mom gave me some money to buy food, I rode my bike to buy food. Oh my God, I had a small accident and, well, my bike was damaged. It's a little story in my life.

The student mixes present and past tenses. Use simple past for completed actions in the past (remember -> had, gave, rode, had, was damaged). Suggestions: consistently use past tense for past events; replace present forms (have, is give, giving) with past forms (had, gave, gave me, rode).

× Yes, I remember that when I was little, I have a little Pike and in one day, but in one day when my mom is give me giving me some money for buy food, I ride my pie to buy food and Oh my God, I have a sign and and well, my buy well is a shambling tacos. It's very it's a little story in my life.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was little, I had a small bike. One day, when my mom gave me some money to buy food, I rode my bike to buy food. Oh my God, I had a small accident and, well, my bike was damaged. It's a little story in my life.

Pronouns and nouns are confused or misspelled (Pike, pie, buy well). Use correct nouns and pronouns: bike (not Pike or pie), my bike (not my buy well). Suggestions: check word choice and spelling; replace incorrect pronouns/nouns with correct ones and keep consistency (my bike).

× Yes, well, I think in my country it's very popular because I think 10 people are half nine people know how to ride a bike.

✓ Yes, well, I think in my country it's very popular because I think nine out of ten people know how to ride a bike.

The original phrase '10 people are half nine people' is ungrammatical and mixes numbers. Use a clear singular/plural structure 'nine out of ten people' where 'people' remains plural and the fraction is expressed correctly. Suggestion: use 'nine out of ten people' or 'most people' for clarity.

× It's very popular because very convenient in a smart in a small town then, but now people usually use motorbike to go under go on my country.

✓ It's very popular because it's very convenient in small towns; however, now people usually use motorbikes to get around in my country.

Prepositions and articles are incorrect: use 'in small towns' (not 'in a smart in a small town'), 'use motorbikes' (plural), and 'get around in my country' (correct phrasal verb). Suggestions: use 'in' for locations, 'in my country' at the end, and the verb phrase 'get around' to mean travel locally.

× It's very it's a little story in my life.

✓ It's a little story in my life.

Redundant 'it's very it's' is ungrammatical. For third person singular contractions 'it's' is appropriate once. Suggestion: remove the extra phrase; keep 'It's a little story in my life.'