Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Mô phỏngPart12026-09-03 15:28:55

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course my dad bought me one, but I'm not really good at it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course not only student, even the working person prefer riding bikes to company instead of, uh, subway or bus.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并且結構完整。先直接回答,再補充具體細節(例如年齡、騎車頻率、學會的情況或記憶),用連接詞使語句更連貫。注意語法(例如用過去式描述童年經歷)和詞彙準確性。建議控制在最多五句之內。

Ví dụ: Yes. My father bought me a small bicycle when I was seven, but I didn’t ride it very often because I found it difficult. I remember falling a few times at first, so I took lessons from a neighbor to improve. After a few months I became more confident and could ride around the park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更清晰、語法正確且提供具體支持細節。先給出總結性意見,再用連接詞(for example, because, therefore)解釋原因並給出具體例子(比如通勤距離、環保或交通擁堵)。注意名詞複數和詞序(students, working people, commute)。保持句子簡潔。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many students and office workers choose cycling to commute because it is faster during rush hour and cheaper than public transport. Also, the government has built many bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and more convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, of course my dad bought me one, but I'm not really good at it.

✓ Yes, of course — my dad bought me one, but I wasn't really good at it.

句子主要时态是过去时(谈论小时候),所以“I'm not really good at it”使用现在时不合适。应将其改为过去时“wasn't”以保持时态一致。建议:回顾过去时的用法。当谈论过去的习惯或能力时,用过去时(was/were,或动词的过去式)。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, of course not only student, even the working person prefer riding bikes to company instead of, uh, subway or bus.

✓ Yes, of course — not only students, even working people prefer riding bikes to commuting by subway or bus.

原句存在多个错误: 1) 单复数问题:"student" 和 "the working person" 应为复数(students, working people),因为说的是一般人群。属于“单数与复数问题”。 2) 动词形式:主语为复数(students, working people),动词应为复数形式"prefer"(原句已有preferr?实际为 prefer 正确)。 3) 介词和短语使用不当:"to company" 不合适,正确表达为 "to commute" 或 "to commuting",这里用动词不定式或动名词需改写为 "commuting by subway or bus",更自然。整体建议:把人群名词改为复数,使用合适的动词或名词短语(commute/commuting),并用介词 "by" 表示交通工具。

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