Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Mô phỏngPart12026-09-03 11:37:17

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Now I only have food.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, until now the bike is. Still feel popular?

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 18.0

Gợi ý: Your answer does not respond to the question. It should start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, followed by one or two supporting details (e.g. how often you used it, who you rode with, or why you didn’t have one). Keep it natural, relevant and no longer than five sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to my friend’s house and to the park, because it was my main way of getting around. However, I stopped riding it often after I started school and my parents bought a scooter. Looking back, those rides helped me feel independent and made my childhood more active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Give a direct opinion first (Yes or No), then explain with specific reasons or examples (who uses bikes, where, for what purpose). Use linking words such as “because”, “for example” or “however” to make the answer coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are still quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting in crowded cities. For example, students and delivery workers often ride bikes since they are cheap and convenient. However, in larger cities some people prefer motorbikes or cars for longer distances.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Now I only have food.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't have a bike when I was a child; I only had food.

The student's reply does not answer the examiner's past-tense question and has incorrect sentence structure and meaning. The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which requires a past-tense response (did/didn't) and a clear subject-verb structure. The original 'Now I only have food.' shifts to present tense and an unrelated idea. Suggestion: use past tense to match the question, provide a direct yes/no or brief statement (e.g., 'No, I didn't; I only had food.'). Grammar problem type ID:26

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, until now the bike is. Still feel popular?

✓ Yes, bikes are still popular here.

The student's reply is ungrammatical and mixes tenses and word order. 'Until now the bike is' is incorrect English: 'until now' implies a change up to the present and would normally pair with present perfect or present simple, and 'the bike' is too specific. 'Still feel popular?' is an incomplete question and uses 'feel' incorrectly. The corrected sentence uses plural 'bikes' and proper present simple 'are still popular' to match the examiner's question about general current popularity. Suggestion: use simple present for general truths (e.g., 'Yes, bikes are still popular here.'). Grammar problem type ID:26

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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