Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I very like to ride a bike when I was a child, but I have a big mistake. I have a problem when I ride a bike. I ride very fast, so my sister have a.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, the bike are very popular in our countries. We have a lot of free bike in the street. You just use mobile phone to sketch it and you can ride back in a lot of place.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 用更自然和流利的句子直接回答,注意時態和主謂一致,並用連接詞組織細節。可以先給主句(當時有沒有自行車),接著用一兩句補充具體細節(比如為什麼喜歡、遇到的問題及結果),不要超過五句。範例重點:1) 正確使用過去時,如 "I had / I used to";2) 主謂一致,如 "my sister was" 或 "my sister had a...";3) 用連接詞如 "but" 或 "so" 使句子連貫。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I loved riding it. However, I often rode too fast, so I sometimes fell off and hurt my arm. Because of that, my parents worried and I learned to be more careful.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答時注意單複數和冠詞(the/a),使用更精確詞彙描述共享單車(shared bikes / bike-sharing),並用連接詞使句子流暢。可先直接回答(Yes/No + 主句),然後給出一兩個具體原因或例子(如使用方式、便利性、影響)。保持句子數量不超過五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially bike-sharing services. You can unlock a bike with your phone and leave it at many designated spots, which makes short trips very convenient. As a result, more people choose bikes for commuting and running errands.
× Yes, I very like to ride a bike when I was a child, but I have a big mistake.
✓ Yes, I liked to ride a bike when I was a child, but I had a big problem.
问题类型:现在时/过去时使用错误(应使用过去时描述童年)。这句话讲的是过去的经历,动词“like”和“have”应使用过去式“liked”和“had”。另外“big mistake”在此语境不合适,改为“big problem”更自然。建议:当描述过去发生的习惯或状态时,使用一般过去时,如“I liked”,“I had”。
× I have a problem when I ride a bike.
✓ I had a problem when I rode a bike.
问题类型:主谓一致/时态一致错误。原句中时态前后不一致:开头用了现在时“I have”,后面又用现在时“when I ride”,但整句应描述过去情况,需用过去时“had…rode”。建议:保持句子时态一致,描述过去用一般过去时。
× I ride very fast, so my sister have a.
✓ I rode very fast, so my sister had one.
问题类型:主谓一致(及时态)和句子不完整。原句“my sister have a.” 主语为单数第三人称应用“has”或过去时“had”;句末缺少名词(如“one”指代自行车)。并且描述童年需用过去时,将“I ride”改为“I rode”。建议:保证主谓在时态和人称上一致,并补全被省略的名词。
× Yes, the bike are very popular in our countries.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country.
问题类型:主谓一致与冠词/数的使用。原句中“the bike are”主语与动词不一致(单数名词用复数动词),且“our countries”复数不自然。改为复数主语“bikes”与复数动词“are”,并将“our countries”改为单数“our country”。建议:复数名词配复数动词;若泛指一种交通工具,通常用复数形式。
× We have a lot of free bike in the street.
✓ We have a lot of free bikes on the street.
问题类型:量词/可数名词和介词使用错误。原句中“a lot of”后应接可数名词复数“bikes”;另外地点介词应为“on the street”而非“in the street”(在街道上)。建议:可数名词使用复数形式,注意常见介词搭配(on the street)。
× You just use mobile phone to sketch it and you can ride back in a lot of place.
✓ You just use your mobile phone to scan it, and you can return it in many places.
问题类型:动词使用不当与介词搭配错误。原句“sketch”用法错误,正确动作应为“scan”(扫描二维码/扫码)或“use an app”;“ride back”表意模糊,改为“return it”;“in a lot of place”应为“in many places”或“at many locations”。建议:选择语义准确的动词(scan/scan the QR code),使用复数或正确量词,并用合适介词短语(at/in many places -> at many locations)。