Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. For example, say when you had the bike, who you rode with, and a specific memory or feeling.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it with my cousins. For example, we used to race along the park every weekend, which created many happy memories for me.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific reasons and a linking phrase. Use correct tense and complete sentences; avoid fragments and unclear words. Mention who uses bikes, typical places or purposes, and one brief example or result.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, I often see students and workers cycling to school or to the market, especially in busy city neighborhoods.

× Yes, I had a bike before when I was a child and I'm actually enjoying it together with my cousins and we build a memorable memories together.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to enjoy riding it with my cousins and we built memorable memories together.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'Had' and 'when I was a child' require past-time continuations: use past habits 'used to enjoy' or 'enjoyed riding'. 'I'm actually enjoying it' is present continuous and conflicts with past context. 'We build' should be past 'we built' to match past timeframe. 'A memorable memories' is incorrect article/number; use 'memorable memories' or 'a memorable memory'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) and correct article/number agreement.

× So I'm very proud that I have a bike before.

✓ So I'm very proud that I had a bike before.

The sentence uses present perfect/present ('I have') with the time marker 'before' referring to past. Use past 'had' to match the past time reference. The main issue is incorrect tense, but it specifically results in singular/plural/tense mismatch in context; correct to 'had'.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country because as I go outside, I saw a lot of people using it and it is actually.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country because when I go outside, I see a lot of people using them.

The sentence mixes present ('are popular', 'as I go outside') with past 'I saw'. For a general statement use present tense 'I see'. Also 'bikes' is plural so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it'. Remove the fragment 'and it is actually' which is incomplete. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for general facts and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× A culture of everyone to Rd. with it when they.

✓ Riding a bike is part of the culture; everyone rides bikes when they can.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and has wrong preposition/word forms ('to Rd.' likely intended 'to ride' or 'riding'). Also 'with it when they' is incomplete. Rephrase to a complete sentence: 'Riding a bike is part of the culture; everyone rides bikes when they can.' This fixes verb form (gerund), preposition issues, and completes the idea.