Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on producing a clear, direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (past tense, subject-verb agreement) and use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences) and avoid unclear phrases like "when I'm inside" or "very difficult place."

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a remote village and we couldn’t afford one because my parents were farmers with limited income. So I usually walked to school or borrowed a bicycle from a neighbor when I needed one.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No) then support it with two specific, coherent reasons using linking words (for example, because, also, for instance). Use correct nouns and relationships (e.g., "rural people," "members of the royal family," "popular artists"). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "ridges people" and repeat words correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel, especially for people in rural areas. Also, some celebrities and even members of the royal family have promoted cycling, which has increased its popularity in cities.

× I don't have a bike when I'm inside because we are very, very far from very difficult place.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because we lived in a very remote and difficult place.

The student is describing past circumstances so the present tense 'don't have' and 'I'm' are incorrect. Use past simple ('didn't have', 'was', 'lived') to match the time frame. Also replace 'very far from very difficult place' with 'lived in a very remote and difficult place' for clarity and correct collocation. Suggestion: identify the time context (childhood) and consistently use past tense verbs and natural phrases like 'remote' or 'difficult area'.

× We born, we have not enough financial condition.

✓ We were born into a family that did not have enough financial means.

The phrase 'We born' lacks the auxiliary verb for the passive past ('were born'). 'Financial condition' is non-idiomatic and should be 'financial means' or 'financial resources'. Also use past simple 'did not have' to indicate past lack. Suggestion: use 'were born' for passive birth statement and 'did not have enough financial means/resources' to express lack of money.

× My parents is agriculture, so I don't have bike when I'm.

✓ My parents are farmers, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

'My parents is' has wrong verb form and 'agriculture' is a noun not a profession; use 'are farmers'. The clause 'I don't have bike when I'm' is incomplete and mixes present and past; use past 'didn't have a bike when I was a child'. Also use 'a bike' with the article. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement ('parents are') and use appropriate noun for occupation ('farmers'), keep tense consistent with childhood context.

× Yes, in my country have popular bike because there are so many ridges people and a royal family also many popular artist so they have they use popular bike like royal boy.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because there are many rural people, and the royal family and many popular artists also use bikes, so they are seen as fashionable like among royal youth.

The original sentence omits the verb 'there are' at the start and uses incorrect nouns ('ridges people' unclear) and awkward structure. Use 'bikes are popular' or 'there are many bikes' for clarity. Replace 'ridges people' with 'rural people' if intended, and rephrase the part about the royal family and artists to show they use bikes. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('bikes are') and clearer word choice. Suggestion: break into two simpler clauses, use 'bikes are popular because...' and 'the royal family and popular artists also use them', and choose correct nouns like 'rural people' or 'villagers'.