Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I hate about when I work with you.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Seattle.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 12.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời hiện tại không trả lời đúng câu hỏi, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn cần: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề (có/không và ngắn gọn). 2) Thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (mô tả chiếc xe, tần suất dùng, kỉ niệm hoặc lý do). 3) Dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, because, so). 4) Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (bike, ride, childhood, remember, often).
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me when I was seven. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day because it was my main way to get around. For example, I remember practicing tricks with my friends in the park on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không liên quan; chỉ nêu một từ. Bạn cần: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp (yes/no hoặc a brief statement). 2) Thêm 1–2 câu giải thích cụ thể (mức độ phổ biến, lý do, nơi hay dùng, so sánh với phương tiện khác). 3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, although, however). 4) Tránh trả lời một từ; cung cấp thông tin cụ thể để thể hiện vốn từ và khả năng diễn đạt.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and good for avoiding traffic. However, their popularity depends on the city — for example, in some places with better bike lanes, more people choose cycling.
× Yes, I hate about when I work with you.
✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and does not answer the question. It mixes present tense 'hate' with unrelated clauses. The correct reply should use past simple to match the examiner's question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. Use 'had' for past possession and 'when I was a child' as the time expression. Suggestion: form a simple past statement: 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Note: This error corresponds to Sentence structure errors (ID 26).
× Seattle.
✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities like Seattle.
A one-word answer 'Seattle.' does not properly answer the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. It lacks a verb and sentence structure. The reply should state an opinion using present simple (are) and a subject (bikes). Provide a brief explanation or example. Suggestion: use 'Bikes are' + adjective + supporting clause, e.g. 'Bikes are quite popular in my country.' Note: This error corresponds to Sentence structure errors (ID 26).