Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조는 명확하지만 더 자연스럽고 풍부한 응답을 위해 세부사항과 연결어를 추가하세요. 예를 들어 언제, 누구 것으로 빌렸는지, 어떻게 배웠는지, 그리고 그 경험에 대한 감정이나 결과를 한두 문장으로 덧붙이면 좋습니다. 또한 'friend's' 앞에 관사 사용과 소유 표현을 명확히 하고 반복되는 'bike' 단어는 대체 표현을 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: I didn't have my own bike when I was a child, so I often borrowed a friend's bicycle to practice. For example, my neighbor taught me how to balance and pedal in the park on weekends, and after a few lessons I was able to ride confidently.

Gợi ý: 의견 제시는 좋지만 문장 연결과 구체적 근거가 부족합니다. 연결어(for example, moreover, therefore)를 사용해 이유들을 논리적으로 이어주고, ‘access’ 대신 더 자연스러운 표현(affordable, easy to get, widely available)을 사용하세요. 또한 어디에서 특히 인기 있는지(도시, 학교 주변 등)나 통계적 또는 개인적 예시를 한 문장 정도 추가하면 신뢰도가 올라갑니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and widely available. Moreover, many people use them for short trips and exercise; for example, I've noticed a lot of children riding bikes around school areas and parks on weekends.

× No, I didn't have my own bike, so I sometimes borrowed my friend's bike to learn how to bike.

✓ No, I didn't have my own bike, so I sometimes borrowed a friend's bike to learn how to ride.

The definite article 'my' before 'friend's bike' implies a specific friend known to the listener; 'a friend's bike' is more natural when referring to borrowing from some friend in general. Also, 'learn how to bike' is less natural than 'learn how to ride' or 'learn to ride a bike.' Use 'ride' as the verb collocating with 'bike.' Suggestions: use 'a friend's bike' and replace 'learn how to bike' with 'learn how to ride' or 'learn to ride a bike.'

× Yes, I think so. It's easier to access.

✓ Yes, I think so. Bikes are easy to access.

'It's easier to access' uses 'it' as a dummy subject and an adjective structure that sounds incomplete here. Better to use 'Bikes are easy to access' to make the subject clear and match the topic. This puts the sentence in simple present to state a general fact. Suggestion: state the subject 'bikes' and use 'are easy to access.'

× And it's also good for people's health.

✓ They are also good for people's health.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'bikes' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'they' or repeat 'bikes' to maintain number agreement. Suggestion: use 'They are also good for people's health' or 'Bikes are also good for people's health.'

× So I think it's popular these days, especially for young children.

✓ So I think they are popular these days, especially among young children.

Again, 'it' incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural); use 'they.' Also, use the preposition 'among' with groups of people rather than 'for.' Maintain simple present 'are popular' to express a general truth. Suggestion: use 'they are popular' and 'among young children.'