Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think, uh, not too much popular bikes in my country because our roads, uh, are uh, very crowded and dangerous, uh, so, uh, people prefer uh, use transportation instead of bikes, uh, some, uh, country, uh.

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a complete, past-tense answer with a brief supporting detail. Avoid one-word replies and use correct tense. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add a short specific detail (where you rode it, who you rode with, or how often).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and organized: begin with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give 2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'therefore'). Avoid filler words (uh, um) and incorrect grammar. Use precise vocabulary (crowded, unsafe, public transport) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. This is mainly because the roads are crowded and unsafe for cyclists, and as a result many people prefer to use buses or cars for commuting.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'do' (present) is inconsistent with the question. Change to 'did' to match past-time reference. Suggestion: Answer past questions with past tense verbs (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

Sentence structure errors

× I think, uh, not too much popular bikes in my country because our roads, uh, are uh, very crowded and dangerous, uh, so, uh, people prefer uh, use transportation instead of bikes, uh, some, uh, country, uh.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because our roads are very crowded and dangerous, so people prefer to use public transportation instead of bikes in some areas.

This sentence has multiple structural and grammatical problems: incorrect word order ('not too much popular bikes'), missing auxiliary for negation, incorrect verb form ('prefer use' should be 'prefer to use'), and unclear phrase 'some country'. Corrections made: use auxiliary 'do' for negation ('I don't think'), place adjective 'popular' after the verb 'are' ('bikes are very popular'), use adverb placement ('very popular'), use infinitive after 'prefer' ('prefer to use'), and clarify location as 'in some areas' rather than 'some country'. Suggestions: Break long sentences into clear clauses, use proper negation with auxiliary verbs, place adjectives after linking verbs, and use 'prefer to + verb' for preferences.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Crowded— Packed
Dangerous— Menacing; Hazardous
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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