Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan, ancak daha doğal ve etkili olması için biraz daha ayrıntı eklemelisiniz. Cümleyi genişleterek bir konu cümlesi ve 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı (örneğin ne tür bir bisiklet olduğu, bisikleti nasıl kullandığınız veya onunla ilgili anınız) ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın ve tekrarlardan kaçının.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I remember my father teaching me to balance, which made me feel very proud.

Gợi ý: Cevap fikri açık ancak dilbilgisi hataları, doğallık eksikliği ve belirsiz ifadeler var. Daha akıcı ve doğru bir yapı kullanın: açık bir konu cümlesi, sebepler (örneğin altyapı, iklim, toplu taşıma) ve bir örnek veya sonuç ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (for example, however, because) kullanarak mantığı güçlendirin ve tek cümle içinde gereksiz tekrar yapmayın.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because the cities lack safe bike lanes and public transport is more convenient. For example, many people prefer buses or cars for commuting, so cycling is mainly seen among students and enthusiasts.

× In my opinion, bikes are not popular in my country because it is not useful.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are not popular in my country because they are not useful.

The sentence uses 'it' to refer to 'bikes', which is plural. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to match. Also ensure pronoun-antecedent agreement: plural noun -> plural pronoun. Suggestion: replace 'it is not useful' with 'they are not useful'.

× Some people using bike but too much people not using bike.

✓ Some people use bikes, but many people do not use them.

The original has multiple issues: missing finite verb ('using' should be 'use'), incorrect quantifier ('too much people' is ungrammatical; use 'many people'), and pronoun/number mismatch ('bike' singular vs plural 'people' and missing object pronoun). The corrected sentence uses present simple 'use' to match the question about general popularity, uses the quantifier 'many', plural 'bikes', and the pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: use complete clauses with proper subject-verb agreement and correct quantifiers: 'Some people use bikes, but many people do not use them.'