Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and cohesion. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, correct noun phrases, and avoid filler words. Use one or two supporting details connected with a linking word. For example, correct tense (I had), singular/plural (grandparents), and replace fillers (umm) with short pauses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandparents bought it for me as a birthday present, so I was really happy and rode it every afternoon to visit my friends.

Gợi ý: Focus on accuracy and clear reasoning. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Correct word choice (cars, trains, buses) and grammar (bikes are). Provide one concrete example or comparison.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars and public transport is unreliable, so cycling is a cheap and flexible way to travel short distances.

× Uh, when I were a tribe, I have a bag, umm, my grandparent, uh, bought me this bike. Umm, I'm so happy for umm, this gift.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I had a bag. My grandparents bought me this bike. I was so happy about this gift.

Multiple pronoun and related grammatical errors: 'when I were a tribe' uses wrong pronoun and noun; should be 'when I was a child' (singular first person with past tense verb was and correct noun). 'I have a bag' is present tense; context requires past tense 'I had'. 'my grandparent' is singular but likely plural; use 'my grandparents' if both, or 'my grandparent' with article 'my' is acceptable but keep verb agreement: 'bought me' is past tense and correct; however combine sentences for clarity. 'I'm so happy for this gift' mixes present with past context; change to 'I was so happy about this gift' to match past time. Suggestion: match past tense for childhood events and use correct nouns/pronouns.

× I think by a popular in my country because the car and recycle and bus is uh, not popular. Bikes, uh is convenient for everyone.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because cars, subways, and buses are not popular. Bikes are convenient for everyone.

'I think by a popular' is incorrect phrase and contains article/pronoun errors; correct subject is 'bikes' (plural). Use plural verbs: 'bikes are' not 'bikes is'. 'the car and recycle and bus is' has incorrect nouns and singular verb; use plural nouns 'cars, subways, and buses' and plural verb 'are'. Also 'recycle' is wrong noun here; likely 'subway' or 'public transport'—replace with appropriate noun. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subjects require 'are'.