Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have a bike when I was child. I have got my first bike when I was 18.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are often popular in my country by plays vital role for traveling. It uh, people use bike to travel. Uh, people use bike to uh, reach offices, their workplace and many more places.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Use correct verb tenses and form a concise, natural response. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add a brief supporting detail if needed. Avoid mixing present simple with past events and reduce redundancy.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I only got my first bike when I was 18 because I lived in a city where bikes weren't practical.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opening sentence stating your opinion, then add specific reasons with linking words. Reduce filler words (uh) and grammatical errors. Use plural/singular agreement and more precise vocabulary (commonly used, play a vital role, commute).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are inexpensive and convenient. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work and run short errands, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of tense and auxiliary (Present vs Past)

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child') so the past simple tense is required. 'Don't have' is present simple and does not match the time frame. Also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Use 'didn't have' to show past negative: 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

Incorrect use of tense (Present Perfect vs Past Simple)

× I have got my first bike when I was 18.

✓ I got my first bike when I was 18.

The clause 'when I was 18' specifies a finished past time, so the past simple ('got') is appropriate. 'Have got' (present perfect) is used for actions with relevance to the present or unspecified time, so it is incorrect here. Use 'I got my first bike when I was 18.'

Incorrect use of articles and word order

× Yes, bikes are often popular in my country by plays vital role for traveling.

✓ Yes, bikes are often popular in my country and play a vital role in travel.

Sentence has multiple issues: 'by plays' is ungrammatical — use a conjunction 'and' plus correct verb form 'play' to match plural 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement). 'A vital role' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Use preposition 'in' with 'travel' (or 'for traveling') and 'travel' as a noun is more natural here. So: 'bikes ... play a vital role in travel.'

Incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement

× It uh, people use bike to travel.

✓ People use bikes to travel.

The original mixes an unnecessary pronoun 'It' with 'people'. Remove 'It' and make 'bike' plural to generalize; match plural with verb: 'use bikes'. Also use the infinitive 'to travel' is fine. So: 'People use bikes to travel.'

Incorrect use of articles and pluralization

× Uh, people use bike to uh, reach offices, their workplace and many more places.

✓ People use bikes to reach offices, their workplaces, and many other places.

Make 'bike' plural to match general subject 'people' ('bikes'). 'Workplace' should be plural 'workplaces' because referring to different people's workplaces. Use 'many other places' instead of 'many more places' for natural phrasing. Include commas properly and remove filler 'uh'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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