Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Do you have a bag where you when a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Do you take back a prom you in your computer?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 18.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有回应考官的问题,而且有严重的语法和词汇错误。改进建议: 1) 直接回答问题:首先用一句简短的肯定或否定句回答是否有自行车。2) 提供1–2个具体细节来支持你的回答,例如谁借给你、什么时候得到、骑车去哪里或学骑的方法;保持句子总数不超过5句。3) 注意基本语法与时态(过去时),并使用与儿童时期相关的词汇如"when I was a child","my parents","learned to ride"。4) 使用连接词如"because"或"and"使叙述连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because I enjoyed riding, I often went to school on my bike with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 12.0Gợi ý: 你的回答完全未回答考官的问题,且句子无意义。改进建议: 1) 直接回应问题:先给出总体看法(肯定或否定)。2) 提供1–2个具体原因或例子说明自行车流行与否,如通勤、城市基础设施、环境或文化因素。3) 使用适当的连接词("because", "for example", "however")保持逻辑性。4) 注意语法和句型简洁,尽量使用现在时描述普遍事实。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities there are bike lanes and shared bike services, so riding is convenient and affordable.
× Do you have a bag where you when a child.
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
该句结构和时态使用不正确。题目原为过去时询问童年是否有自行车,学生句子使用现在时“Do you have”且词序、词汇错误(bag、where、when 顺序混乱),缺少助动词 did 并且主句动词要用过去式 were。建议:把句子改为过去一般时,使用正确的疑问结构“Did + 主语 + 动词原形”或直接用过去时态的 be 动词构成“Did you have...?”。注意不要把 bag(包)替代 bike(自行车),并保持单词顺序正确。
× Do you take back a prom you in your computer?
✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
学生的回答与考官问题不对应且句子结构混乱,出现了不相关词汇(take back、prom、you in your computer),无法表达“你认为自行车在你们国家受欢迎吗?”的意思。正确应保持一般现在时的疑问句结构“Do you + 动词 + ...?”,并使用动词 think 表达观点,主语与宾语位置要正确。建议:理解原问题含义后,用简单的现在时表达观点,例如“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?” 或者回答性句子“Yes, I think bikes are very popular.”