Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler phrases like "you know" and repetition. Also correct minor grammar ("real keen" → "really keen") and use past tense consistently.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a fast red bike that I loved riding every summer. For example, I often rode it to the park with my friends, which improved my confidence and fitness. Now the bike is still stored in our garage as a keepsake.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Fix errors: "there were few bike roads" not "there was few", "the government is building" not "are relatant". Avoid repeating "in my country".

Ví dụ: Yes, they are becoming more popular. Until recently there were few cycle paths, but the government is now building many new bike lanes, which makes cycling safer and more attractive for commuters and students. As a result, more people are choosing bikes for short trips.

× Well, yes I did.

✓ Well, yes, I did.

Add a comma after 'yes' for correct punctuation and natural pause; this is not a grammar problem from the provided list but improves clarity.

× When I was a child I had a bike and it was very fast you know in the summer I was real keen about spending my time with this bike and you know, it is still in our garage.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike, and it was very fast. In the summer I was really keen on spending my time with that bike, and it is still in our garage.

Present tense reference and adverb/adjective usage issues: 'real keen' is informal and missing adverb form; change to 'really keen on'. Use 'that bike' for clarity. Also split run-on sentence into separate sentences for correct sentence structure (problem type 26) and adjust punctuation. 'Real' should be 'really' (problem type 13). The final clause refers to the bike's current location so present tense 'is' is correct.

× Well, until recent years there was few bike roads in my country, but now the government are relatant to create new bike roads in my country and that's why it's so popular trend in my country.

✓ Until recent years, there were few bike lanes in my country, but now the government is committed to creating new bike lanes, and that's why it's such a popular trend here.

Past tense agreement and count noun/issues: 'there was few bike roads' is incorrect; use plural verb with plural noun 'there were few bike lanes' (problem types 1 and 27). 'Bike roads' is better expressed as 'bike lanes' (word choice). 'Government are' is subject-verb agreement error in standard English; use 'government is' (problem type 27). 'Relatant' is incorrect word form; correct to 'committed to creating' using correct verb + -ing form after 'to' (problem types 8 and 9). 'It's so popular trend' needs article and adjective order: 'such a popular trend' (problem type 22/13). Replaced redundant 'in my country' with 'here' to avoid repetition.