Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, my father gave me my first bike when I was six. He gave me as a birthday present.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bike is extremely popular in China. China was once called the Kingdom of Bikes. Nowadays there are still many people riding a bike to go to school or go to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息明确,但有小语法问题与冗余。建议在句子间加入连贯词,并修正不完整或重复表达(例如第二句应补主语或合并为一条更自然的句子)。可以稍微扩展细节(例如描述你对那辆自行车的感受或使用经历)以增加内容丰富度,但保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, my father gave me my first bike when I was six as a birthday present. I remember feeling very excited because it was bright red and a bit too big for me. As a result, I practiced every afternoon until I became confident riding it to my friend’s house.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰且有文化背景,但存在小的语法与用词问题(例如应使用复数“bikes”或“cycling”)。建议使用连接词优化衔接,并加入更具体的例子或对比(如共享单车的兴起或城市与农村的差异),同时控制在五句内以保持自然有效。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are extremely popular in China. In the past China was even called the "Kingdom of Bikes," and that tradition continues today. For example, many people now use shared bikes or cycle to work and school, especially in cities where traffic can be heavy.
× Yes, bike is extremely popular in China.
✓ Yes, bikes are extremely popular in China.
原句缺少复数形式。主语“bike”应表示一种普遍现象,用复数“bikes”或不可数结构更合适;同时谓语需与复数主语一致,使用“are”。建议将可数名词在泛指时用复数形式,或改为“The bicycle is extremely popular in China.”(将bicycle作为整个类别的代表)。
× China was once called the Kingdom of Bikes.
✓ China was once called the 'Kingdom of Bikes'.
句子本身语法正确,但引号有助于表示称号或俗称。此处没有主-谓不一致问题;仅建议格式改善以突出称呼。如果坚持原句也可接受。
× Nowadays there are still many people riding a bike to go to school or go to work.
✓ Nowadays there are still many people riding bikes to go to school or to work.
原句中“riding a bike”在表达普遍习惯时应使用复数“bikes”或保持泛指;另外并列不定式前后一致性更好,使用“to go to school or to work”。建议在并列结构中保持一致形式,并对可数名词用复数以表示泛指。