Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct facts, use concise sentences, and avoid errors in vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I had a bike.), then give one or two specific supporting details (who bought it, when you learned to ride, what happened to it). Use correct past-tense forms and precise words (bike instead of bag, stolen/sold rather than sold out if appropriate). Keep it to no more than five sentences and link ideas with simple connectors (but, because, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me when I was in primary school and she taught me how to ride it. I used it to go to the park every weekend, but when I was in my sixth year of primary school it was stolen outside the park. After that I stopped biking for a while.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and accurate: correct key vocabulary (shared bikes, not share bags), use linking words (for example, because) and give a specific reason or example. Use measurements correctly (kilometers) and avoid redundancy. Keep answers to 2–4 sentences with coherent flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. There are many shared bikes available on the streets, so people often use them for short trips. For example, many commuters ride a bike from home to work because it is cheap and faster for distances under ten kilometres.

× I had a bag when I was in primary schools.

✓ I had a bag when I was in primary school.

Use the singular 'primary school' to refer to the stage of education in general or to one school attended; 'primary schools' (plural) suggests multiple different schools, which doesn't fit the intended meaning. Suggestion: Use 'primary school' for the stage or 'primary schools' only when talking about many schools in general.

× But unfortunately when I was at six years primary school I have fought from the park and it was sold out.

✓ But unfortunately, when I was six years old and in primary school, I was robbed at the park and my bike was sold.

Multiple errors: tense and verb choice. 'I have fought' is present perfect and incorrect here; context requires simple past 'I was robbed' or 'someone stole it'. 'Six years primary school' needs correct order 'six years old and in primary school'. 'It was sold out' is wrong for a stolen item; 'sold out' means out of stock. Use 'my bike was sold' or 'someone sold it'. Suggestion: Keep simple past for past events, use correct expressions like 'was robbed', 'had it stolen', or 'someone stole it'.

× There are lots of share bags in my country.

✓ There are lots of shared bikes in my country.

The original phrase 'share bags' is likely a vocabulary error rather than pure grammar; it also creates subject-verb confusion. 'Shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing services' fits the intended meaning. 'There are' is correct for plural, so correction focuses on the noun. Suggestion: Use accurate nouns: 'shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing services'.

× I can see them everywhere on the street.

✓ I can see them everywhere on the streets.

Pronoun 'them' refers to 'shared bikes' (plural) which is fine; however 'on the street' is acceptable but 'on the streets' is more natural when speaking generally about many locations. Suggestion: Use 'on the streets' for general locations or 'on the street' for a specific street.

× People are used to do a short term trip so they can ride a bike from their home to the company or just within 10 kilograms destination.

✓ People are used to taking short trips, so they can ride a bike from their home to their workplace or to destinations within 10 kilometers.

'Used to do' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'used to doing' for a habitual action or 'are used to taking' here. 'Short term trip' should be 'short trips' or 'short-term trips'. 'Company' is awkward; 'workplace' or 'office' fits better. '10 kilograms destination' mixes mass with distance; use '10 kilometers'. Suggestion: Use 'used to taking' for habitual activities, hyphenate 'short-term' when used as an adjective, and use correct units (kilometers) and natural nouns like 'workplace'.