Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak in the correct tense and use accurate vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say whether you had a bike (past tense), mention who gave it and when, and add a brief detail about how you felt or used it. Also correct vocabulary mistakes ("bribe" → "bike") and grammar errors ("have" → "had", "shy" → "six"? — likely "six" should be clarified or use "on my sixth birthday").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me on my sixth birthday, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. I remember feeling very happy and proud when I first learned to ride.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with a clear reason using linking words. Use correct plural and tense forms and give a specific example or comparison. For instance, say generally whether bikes are popular, then support with a specific observation about children, commuting, or infrastructure. Keep it concise and natural (up to five sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, when I was a child many of my friends owned bikes, and people often use them for short trips to school or the market. In some cities there are also bike lanes, which encourages more people to cycle.

× Yes I have a bribe.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used the wrong noun 'bribe' instead of 'bike' and incorrect tense. The question asks about having a bike when they were a child (past), so use past tense 'had'. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for clarity. Suggestion: learn correct vocabulary (bike) and match tense to the question (past).

× When I was shy on my birthday my dad buy for me.

✓ When I was six on my birthday, my dad bought it for me.

Multiple problems: 'shy' is likely a misspelling of an age word such as 'six' or incorrect word choice; the verb 'buy' is present tense but the event is in the past so use past tense 'bought'; include the object 'it' (the bike). Also add a comma after the time clause. Suggestion: use past tense for past events (bought) and include the direct object. If intended word was an age, use the correct numeral or word (six).

× Yes, because when I was kids, all of my friend, they have a bike.

✓ Yes, because when I was a kid, all of my friends had bikes.

Errors: 'when I was kids' mismatches singular/plural—use 'a kid' for singular subject; 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'all of'; the clause 'they have a bike' should be in past tense 'had bikes' to match 'when I was a kid'. Remove the redundant pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: ensure subject and noun number agree (a kid vs kids, friend vs friends) and keep consistent past tense for past-time clauses.