Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng cần rút gọn và tự nhiên hơn; tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'went by bike to the school' -> 'rode my bike to school'). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi bạn thường đi, ai cùng bạn, kỷ niệm ngắn) và sử dụng liên từ/ cụm từ nối đơn giản để mạch lạc (e.g., 'Every morning, I rode... because...'). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu để phù hợp với tiêu chí Natural & Effective.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had two bikes as a child. Every morning I rode my bike to school with my friends, usually taking the quiet route past the park because it was safer and more fun.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cần ngữ pháp chính xác, diễn đạt tự nhiên và cụ thể hơn. Sửa cấu trúc và từ vựng không chuẩn (ví dụ 'facility approach' không tự nhiên; 'using car using bikes' sai). Nên nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cơ sở hạ tầng, thói quen, khí hậu) và có thể đưa ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn. Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'however'). Giữ 2-3 câu rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most cities are designed for cars and motorbikes, so there are few bike lanes and people find riding unsafe. For example, my city rarely has dedicated cycling paths, so most commuters prefer motorbikes.

× Of course, I had at least two bikes when I was a child, and I remembered that I usually went by bike to the school with my friends in the morning each day.

✓ Of course, I had at least two bikes when I was a child, and I remember that I usually rode my bike to school with my friends every morning.

The verb phrase 'remembered' is past tense but the student is describing a habitual action in childhood; English often uses simple past for past habits, but 'remember' in present can introduce a recalled habitual action: however here better is 'I remember that I usually rode' or simpler 'I usually rode my bike.' Also 'went by bike to the school' is awkward: use 'rode my bike to school.' 'Each day' is redundant with 'in the morning'; use 'every morning.' Suggested corrections: use 'rode' for bicycle travel, and simplify time expressions. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.

× Actually I don't think so because the facility approach in my country is mainly proposed for the cars and motorbikes.

✓ Actually, I don't think so because infrastructure in my country is mainly designed for cars and motorbikes.

The phrase 'facility approach' is incorrect collocation. Use 'infrastructure' or 'facilities' and 'designed for' instead of 'proposed for.' Also add a comma after 'Actually.' This fixes preposition and word choice errors and makes the sentence natural. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.

× So using car using bikes is not predominant in my country.

✓ So using cars and bikes is not common in my country.

The original sentence repeats 'using' and has wrong noun forms and word order. Use plural 'cars' and 'bikes' and say 'not common' or 'not predominant.' Better structure: 'So using cars and bikes is not common' or 'So car and bike use is not predominant.' This corrects sentence structure and plurality. Note: This explanation is in English as requested.