Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, because they are more cost effective.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,未直接展开主题句并缺乏细节支持。请在回答中给出明确主题句,然后用1–2句具体细节(如谁送的、什么时候学会骑、骑车的频率或感受)来丰富内容,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。注意控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike when I was about six. It was a birthday present from my parents, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because of that, I used to ride almost every afternoon and felt very free and confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 答案有观点但论证单薄。请先用一句明确的主题句表明观点,然后用1–2句具体原因或例子支持(比如城市交通、环保、健身或经济因素),并使用连接词(such as, therefore, because)来增强连贯性。避免口语化过强的词语如“Yeah”。保持在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and practical. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes to avoid traffic and save on fuel costs, and cycling is also encouraged as a healthy, eco-friendly option.
× Yeah, because they are more cost effective.
✓ Yeah, because they are more cost-effective.
错误类型:形容词或副词使用不当。说明:在英语中,复合形容词“cost-effective”通常以连字符连接,尤其是在放在名词前或构成固定短语时。原句没有连字符,书写不规范。建议:在书写复合形容词时加上连字符(cost-effective);口语中发音不受影响,但书面时应注意连字符以提高准确性。