Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually read it every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because they are more economic.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法与用词错误,且信息不够具体。首先,“read”用错,应为“ride”。答案较短且重复(开头与主题句相同),未提供细节(比如什么时候学会骑车、在哪儿骑、谁陪伴、对你的影响等)。建议使用主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句具体细节,并用连接词衔接,如“because/so/when/and”。保持总句数不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I rode almost every day when I was about eight. I learned to ride it in the park near my home, and my older brother often helped me practice, which made me feel very confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,且有小错误(用词应为 “economical” 或 “cost-effective”),缺乏支撑细节。建议在给出观点后,补充一到两个具体原因或例子,并使用连接词(for example, because, so)来增强逻辑性。可以提及环保、交通拥堵或价格因素等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think so, because bicycles are a cheap and convenient way to travel. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes to avoid traffic and save money on fuel, and bike-sharing programs in cities have also increased their popularity.
× I usually read it every day.
✓ I usually rode it every day.
原句中使用了動詞 read(讀)但意思應為「騎(ride)」而且句子是描述過去經常性的動作,應使用動詞 ride 的過去式 rode。錯誤類型對應清單中的“Verb + -ing form”是要求只改列出清單中的類型,但此處實際問題是動詞選擇與時態。建議:確認想表達的動作(騎 bike → ride),並根據時間(過去)把動詞改為過去式(ride → rode)。
× Yes, because they are more economic.
✓ Yes, because they are more economical.
原句中使用 economic(經濟的)作形容詞比較級修飾 bikes,但正確應使用 economical(節省的、經濟實惠的)。economic 多用於描述國家或經濟體系,而 economical 用於描述省錢、節能等。建議:區分 economic 與 economical 的用法,描述物品省錢時用 economical,並保持比較級 more economical。