Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Not really, I don't know how to use it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, most of family did have, and my friends too. Uh, it's only, it's only me that I didn't know how to ride it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Be more direct and provide a complete, natural response with a brief explanation. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid contractions like "don't" only if they reduce clarity, but keep the answer natural. Also correct the phrasing "know how to use it" to "know how to ride one."

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Because I never learned how to ride, my parents never bought one for me. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and use linking words for coherence. Correct grammar ("most families had them" or "most of my family had one"). Avoid filler words like "uh" and repetition. Provide one concrete example or comparison to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, most families own at least one bike for short journeys, and many students cycle to school because it's cheap and convenient. However, I was the only one in my family who never learned to ride.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Not really, I don't know how to use it.

✓ Not really, I didn't know how to use one.

The question refers to having a bike when the student was a child (past time), so tense and pronoun/ reference need adjustment. 'I don't know' is present tense and mismatches the past context; change to past 'I didn't know'. Also 'it' is vague when speaking about bikes in general; use 'one' to refer to a bike in general. Suggestion: match past tense to the time frame and use 'one' for a general object reference.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yeah, most of family did have, and my friends too.

✓ Yeah, most of my family did, and my friends did too.

The phrase 'most of family' is missing the possessive determiner 'my' and sounds ungrammatical. Also 'did have' is awkward here; in short answers it's natural to say 'did' or 'did too.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and include the determiner: 'most of my family did.' Keep tense consistent with past ('did').

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, it's only, it's only me that I didn't know how to ride it.

✓ Uh, I was the only one who didn't know how to ride a bike.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and redundant ('it's only, it's only me that I didn't...'). For past-time context, use past tense 'was' and a clearer relative clause: 'the only one who didn't know how to ride a bike.' Use 'a bike' or 'one' instead of 'it' when speaking generally. This corrects word order and removes redundancy.

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