Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then add one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense for childhood events and avoid extra words. Link ideas with a short connector if needed.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I bought one when I turned 18 because I needed it to travel to university more easily.

Gợi ý: This answer is generally good: clear topic sentence, reasons, and example. Improve by adding a linking phrase and one specific detail (e.g., an example or statistic) to make it more concrete and avoid repetition (‘bikes’ vs ‘motorbikes’ distinction). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap to buy and maintain. For example, many students and office workers ride motorbikes to avoid long bus queues. As a result, riders can usually get through heavy traffic faster than car drivers.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child, but yes, when I turned at 18 of the age I got my bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but yes, when I turned 18 I got one.

Errors: 'don't have' is present tense while the time reference 'when I was a child' is past -> use past tense 'didn't have' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'when I was child' omits the article 'a' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22: Article errors). 'when I turned at 18 of the age' is unidiomatic and incorrect word order; correct form is 'when I turned 18' and using 'I got one' avoids repetition (also subject-verb agreement fixed). Suggestion: Use past simple for past time frames, include necessary articles ('a child') and use natural English phrasing for age ('turned 18').

× Yes, I think bikes are more popular in my country because they are easy to ride and much cheaper to run than cars.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are easy to ride and much cheaper to run than cars.

Issue: 'are more popular' implies a comparison but lacks a clear comparison target; here simple present 'are popular' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). Suggestion: Use simple present to describe general truths or state general popularity; include comparison only when comparing to something explicit.

× People often use motorbikes to commute to work or college, and riders can usually navigate heavy traffic more quickly than drivers of cars.

✓ People often use motorbikes to commute to work or college, and riders can usually navigate heavy traffic more quickly than car drivers.

Minor wording issue: 'drivers of cars' is wordy; 'car drivers' is more natural (Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Prefer concise, natural noun phrases like 'car drivers' to improve fluency.