Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and avoid repetition (eg “as as”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it, especially down steep slopes, and I often used it to cycle to school. Because the routes were short and safe, biking was my main way of getting around.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use correct phrasing and avoid repeating words like “previous/previously”.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are as popular now as they used to be. For example, more people can afford cars and public transport has improved, so bicycles are seen less often in cities.

× Yes, I had a bike as as a child I enjoyed riding a lot, especially on steep slopes and also I use my bike to go to school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike; as a child I enjoyed riding it a lot, especially on steep slopes, and I also used my bike to go to school.

Problems include repetition ('as as')—a typing error (Sentence structure issue, ID 26), inconsistent verb tenses ('had' and 'enjoyed' are past but 'use' is present) which is a Past tense issue (ID 5) and subject-verb agreement/verb form ('riding a lot' is ok but 'use' should be past 'used'). Connectors and punctuation were needed to separate clauses (Sentence structure issue, ID 26). Correction: remove duplicate word, make verbs consistently past tense, add a semicolon/comma for clarity, and add the object 'it' for 'riding'. Suggestions: proofread for duplicate words, keep verb tenses consistent within the same timeframe, and use punctuation to separate ideas.

× Previously there were quite common in my country, but now they aren't as popular as previous times.

✓ Previously they were quite common in my country, but now they aren't as popular as they used to be.

Errors: missing subject after adverb 'Previously' led to unclear structure (Sentence structure issue, ID 26) and awkward comparison 'as popular as previous times' is incorrect (Incorrect comparison object, ID 19). Also 'there were quite common' is ungrammatical—should be 'they were quite common' (Incorrect use of pronouns/structure, ID 12). Correction: supply correct subject 'they', and use the standard comparative phrase 'as they used to be.' Suggestion: ensure sentences have an explicit subject and use established comparative patterns like 'as ... used to be'.

× Cars and other vehicles are more popular and bikes are less frequently seen.

✓ Cars and other vehicles are more popular, and bikes are seen less frequently.

Issue: word order 'less frequently seen' is awkward; while understandable, placing the adverb after the verb is clearer (Incorrect adverb placement, ID 20). Also maintain parallel structure between clauses (Sentence structure issue, ID 26). Correction: reorder to 'seen less frequently' to improve clarity and flow. Suggestion: place adverbs of frequency after the main verb or at the end of the clause for natural English and keep parallel structure in coordinated clauses.