Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
My country is too big to define whether it's popular or not, but I think it's popular in my city because I got a small tongue and, uh, the public transportation isn't that good, so a lot of uh, students just ride the bike to go to school and.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且时态准确,句子可稍微扩展以提供更多信息。避免仅用简短片语并注意时态(过去式)。可以先用主题句回答,然后用1-2句具体细节支持,例如谁给的、在哪儿骑、频率或记忆。尽量不要有填充词(uh)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to the nearby park almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰、连贯并使用连接词组织信息。避免含糊表达和口语填充词,注意词汇准确(例如“small town”而不是“small tongue”)。开头给出直接观点,然后用具体原因和例子支撑,控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: I think bicycles are quite popular in my city. Because public transportation is limited, many residents—especially students—prefer cycling as a convenient and cheap way to get to school and work. For example, I see dozens of students riding to campus every morning.
× Yes, I do.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用了現在式回答一個過去時間的問題(Examiner: Did you have a bike when you were a child?)。助動詞 did 已表示過去,回答時應使用過去時態,所以應答為 “Yes, I did.”。建議:回答與提問時的時態保持一致,若問題是過去式,用過去式回答。
× My country is too big to define whether it's popular or not, but I think it's popular in my city because I got a small tongue and, uh, the public transportation isn't that good, so a lot of uh, students just ride the bike to go to school and.
✓ My country is too big to say whether bikes are popular nationwide, but I think they are popular in my city because I have a small hometown and public transportation isn't very good, so many students just ride bikes to school.
原句有多處結構與用詞不當: 1) “define whether it's popular or not” 用詞不自然,應改為 “say whether bikes are popular nationwide”。 2) “I got a small tongue” 是拼寫或詞彙錯誤(tongue=舌頭),應為“small hometown”。 3) 人稱及代詞不一致,應明確指代 “bikes” 用複數和相應動詞(they are)。 4) 句尾的連接詞“and.” 未完成,句子不完整。應合併並簡化為清晰句子。 建議:說話時注意選詞(hometown 而非 tongue),保持主語一致(bikes → they),避免未完成的句子,並用簡潔短語表達原因(public transportation isn't very good; many students ride bikes to school)。