Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn; tránh nói lặp và câu bỏ dở. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng như “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” (2) Thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết bằng từ nối (e.g., because, so, therefore). (3) Tránh dùng câu quá dài hoặc bỏ dở, nhắc rõ loại phương tiện thay thế nếu cần. Ví dụ lỗi trong câu hiện tại: lặp từ “so”, thiếu cụm từ hoàn chỉnh ở cuối.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because they were quite expensive for my family. Therefore, I usually used public transport or walked to school, which was more affordable and convenient for us.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý; tránh ngắt quãng và cấu trúc không hoàn chỉnh. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề như “I don’t think bikes are very popular.” (2) Giải thích lý do bằng một hoặc hai câu sử dụng linking words (because, due to, instead). (3) Thêm một ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn để cụ thể hóa ý (e.g., many people prefer cars or motorbikes).

Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for convenience. For example, many families own a car and urban areas have heavy traffic, so cycling is less common.

× And in that time I found that the bicycles were too expensive that I could not buy them easily.

✓ At that time I found that bicycles were too expensive, so I could not buy one easily.

The sentence has issues with plural/singular reference and sentence structure. 'The bicycles were too expensive that I could not buy them easily' is incorrect construction. Use 'bicycles' (general plural) without 'the' or use 'one' for singular: 'buy one easily.' Also replace 'that' with a clause connector 'so' to show cause and effect. Suggestion: use 'At that time' instead of 'And in that time' for natural phrasing.

× So I wanted to choose other vehicles that were more suitable for me like.

✓ So I wanted to choose other vehicles that were more suitable for me, such as scooters or motorbikes.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends with 'like' without an object. This is a sentence structure error (incomplete comparative/example phrase). Provide examples after 'such as' or complete the 'like' phrase. Also add commas for clarity.

× So I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because for me nowadays people give. Drive modern cars and vehicle cost rather than using bikes to move on the street and.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because nowadays people prefer driving modern cars; vehicle ownership has become more common than using bikes to get around.

Multiple problems: fragmented sentence and wrong verb choices. 'Give. Drive' is a broken fragment. The main issue fits present tense usage and sentence structure: use present simple 'prefer driving' to state general truth. Replace 'vehicle cost' (unclear) with 'vehicle ownership' or 'cars are more affordable/valued.' Remove trailing 'and'. Make a complete sentence conveying preference for cars over bikes.