Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔で内容は伝わりますが、流暢さと発音の不安（ためらい・繰り返し・誤った語彙）を改善する必要があります。具体的には：1) 言いたい内容を事前に短い文で整理してためらい（uh, I, I）を減らす練習をする。2) 語彙の誤り（"crime school" は恐らく "primary school" などの誤り）を正しく覚える。3) 追加の詳細を一つか二つに絞って、接続詞（for example, so, because）でつなげるとより自然に聞こえます。練習方法：短い自己モノローグを録音して、繰り返し聞き返し発音と語彙を訂正する。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I usually rode it to my primary school. For example, it took me about ten minutes to cycle there, which was convenient and fun.

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定的で要点はあるものの、文法や語順、語彙の選択、流暢さに改善の余地があります。具体的には：1) 主語と動詞の一致を意識する（"Junior high school students go to school by bike." のように）。2) 同じ内容を繰り返さず、接続語（for example, often, usually）を使って具体例を加える。3) 発話の流れをスムーズにするため文を一つか二つにまとめる練習をする。練習方法：高校生や中学生について説明する短い文を作り、正しい語順で何度も声に出して練習する。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many junior high school students usually ride their bikes to school because it's cheap and convenient.

× When I went to, uh, crime school, I, I went to the crime school by bike.

✓ When I went to crime school, I went there by bike.

The original sentence uses past tense correctly but contains unnecessary commas and a redundant article. Remove the filler 'uh' and the repeated phrase 'I, I' and drop 'the' before 'crime school' because 'crime school' is a general institution here. Also replace 'to the crime school' with 'there' to avoid repetition. Suggestions: practice removing fillers and repeated words and use 'there' to refer back to a place previously mentioned.

× The riding bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Riding bikes is popular in my country.

The phrase 'The riding bikes' is ungrammatical: 'riding bikes' functions as a gerund phrase (a singular activity), so it should take singular verb 'is' and no definite article 'the'. Change to 'Riding bikes is popular'. Alternatively, say 'Bicycles are popular'. Suggestions: determine whether the subject is a count noun (use plural) or an activity/gerund (use singular verb).

× Junior high school goes to sorry, junior high school goes to the school by bike.

✓ Junior high school students go to school by bike.

The original sentence incorrectly treats 'junior high school' as the subject performing the action. The correct subject is 'junior high school students'. Remove the filler 'sorry' and the repeated fragment. Also, drop 'the' before 'school' because 'go to school' is the set expression. Use plural verb 'go' to agree with 'students'. Suggestions: identify the logical subject (people, not the institution) and use standard collocation 'go to school'.