Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do uh, mice are popular in my country because they are cheap and also easy to bike And uh, in my country, uh, where buys where bikes are the most popular transportation. I think they are the most popular transportation.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời trực tiếp. Câu trả lời thiếu nội dung, lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ ("mice" thay vì "bikes"), ngắt quãng và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, khi nào, dùng để làm gì). Sử dụng nối như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven because it was an easy way to travel to school. I used it almost every day, especially in summer, so it became my favorite way to get around.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes I do uh, mice are popular in my country because they are cheap and also easy to bike And uh, in my country, uh, where buys where bikes are the most popular transportation. I think they are the most popular transportation.

✓ Yes I do. Bikes are popular in my country because they are cheap and also easy to ride. In my country, bikes are the most popular form of transportation. I think they are the most popular form of transportation.

The student used 'mice' instead of 'bikes' which is a wrong word (lexical/pronoun-like error). Also 'easy to bike' is awkward — use 'easy to ride'. The phrase 'where buys where bikes are the most popular transportation' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be simplified to 'In my country, bikes are the most popular form of transportation.' Suggestions: 1) Use the correct noun 'bikes' not 'mice'. 2) Use the collocation 'easy to ride' rather than 'easy to bike'. 3) Use 'form of transportation' or 'means of transportation' for clarity and correctness. Ensure sentences are separated with proper punctuation and conjunctions removed for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Cheap— Inexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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