Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I have not a bike but but my brother have a car have a bike so actually I afraid of to try the bike and the instead of I sometimes.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I should say the bike is not popular in my country and the crowded city. Sometimes people use the bike but it's not famous in my country.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms (had, had/has), avoid repetition, and give a clear reason with a short supporting detail. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My brother had a bike, but I was afraid to try it because I thought I might fall. So I usually preferred walking or using public transport.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: Make the opinion direct, use correct vocabulary (popular/not popular, crowded cities), and add a specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big, crowded cities. Because traffic is heavy and roads are often unsafe for cyclists, most people prefer cars or public transport.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× No, I have not a bike but but my brother have a car have a bike so actually I afraid of to try the bike and the instead of I sometimes.

✓ No, I did not have a bike, but my brother had a bike, so I was actually afraid to try it sometimes.

Errors: incorrect tense and auxiliary for negation ('have not' vs past 'did not have'), pronoun and noun repetition, subject-verb agreement ('my brother have' should be 'my brother had'), awkward phrase 'afraid of to try' (incorrect infinitive construction) and misplaced words ('and the instead of I'). Correction uses past tense consistently to match 'when you were a child', fixes subject-verb agreement, replaces 'afraid of to try' with 'afraid to try', and uses the pronoun 'it' to refer to the bike. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations, use did + base verb for negation in past, ensure subject and verb agree in number and tense, and use 'afraid to [verb]' or 'afraid of [noun/gerund]'.

Past tense issue

× I should say the bike is not popular in my country and the crowded city.

✓ I would say that bikes are not popular in my country, especially in crowded cities.

Errors: tense/modal nuance ('I should say' is odd for opinion; 'would say' or 'I think' is better), singular/plural confusion ('the bike' and 'the crowded city' sound specific; general statements need plural or generic form), and noun phrase clarity. Correction uses 'would say' to express opinion, plural 'bikes' and 'cities' to make a general statement, and 'especially' to connect idea. Suggestion: use generic plurals for general statements (bikes, cities), and choose appropriate modal ('would' or 'I think') to express opinion.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Sometimes people use the bike but it's not famous in my country.

✓ Sometimes people use bikes, but they are not very popular in my country.

Errors: mixing singular 'the bike' with general meaning and using 'famous' incorrectly for objects; 'famous' describes people or landmarks, not usage/popularity. Correction pluralizes 'bikes' and replaces 'famous' with 'popular', also clarifies contrast with 'sometimes' using 'but'. Suggestion: use 'popular' for general acceptance and plural nouns for general statements; ensure pronouns ('they') match noun number.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Crowded— Packed
Famous— Well known
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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