Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I'm not sure but in my country teenagers use bikes a lot, but in this time doesn't recently.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, fix the missing article and tense phrasing, and add one or two specific details (when you rode it, who gave it to you, or what you used it for). Keep answers concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences) and use a linking word if adding a reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to cycle to the park every afternoon. Because I practiced a lot, I became fairly confident riding on quiet streets.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Be more decisive and correct grammar. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific and coherent details. Fix tense and word order (e.g., 'recently' placement) and use linking words like 'however' or 'recently' correctly. Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes (commuting, leisure), and any trends (e.g., increasing bike lanes or decline due to cars). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among teenagers and people who commute short distances. However, recently their use has declined a bit because more families buy motorbikes and cars, though some cities are promoting cycling by adding bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

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