Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and grammatically accurate: use 'No' instead of 'Nope' for formal test tone, correct tense and articles, and avoid redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore'). Also correct small errors: 'I often walked to school', 'the neighbour's bike', and 'I wished' → 'I wish I had had' or better 'I would have liked to have had a bike'. Keep to maximum 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. My family couldn't afford one, so I often walked to school or shared the neighbour's bike with my sister. I would have liked to have had a bike because it would have made it much easier to get around and saved time on my commute.

Gợi ý: Improve cohesion and accuracy: start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words ('for example', 'also') and correct phrasing ('shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing schemes', 'rent a bike' or 'hire a bike'). Avoid repetition ('bike' repeated unnecessarily). Add one specific example or brief reason to support your point. Keep responses concise (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people own bikes, and there are bike-sharing schemes where you can scan a QR code to hire a bike for short trips, which makes commuting affordable and convenient.

× My family couldn't afford one when I was young, so I often walk to school or share the neighbour's bike with my sister.

✓ My family couldn't afford one when I was young, so I often walked to school or shared the neighbour's bike with my sister.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was young') with present-tense verbs 'walk' and 'share'. Use simple past ('walked', 'shared') to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent by using past tense for actions that occurred in the past.

× I wished I had a bike because it would have made getting around much easier.

✓ I wished I had a bike because it would have made getting around much easier.

Although the grammar forms are acceptable, 'wished' can sound odd with a past conditional; native speakers typically use 'I wish I had had a bike' or 'I wished I had a bike' depending on nuance. To express regret about the past clearly, use past perfect in the wish clause: 'I wish I had had a bike because it would have made getting around much easier.' This keeps the conditional past structure consistent.

× A lot of people here have their own bike and for those who don't have their owns we have something like share shared bikes.

✓ A lot of people here have their own bikes, and for those who don't have their own we have shared bikes.

There are number and word-form errors: 'own bike' should be plural 'own bikes' when referring generally to many people; 'their owns' is incorrect — 'own' is an adjective and does not take 's'. Also 'share shared' is redundant; use 'shared bikes'. Suggestion: use 'their own' + plural noun for general possession: 'their own bikes' and remove duplicated words.

× That means you can scan the QR code and get a bike and a rental bike temporarily to get anywhere you want.

✓ That means you can scan the QR code and get a bike temporarily to go anywhere you want.

The original phrase 'get a bike and a rental bike temporarily' is repetitive. Use a single article and noun phrase: 'get a bike temporarily'. Also 'to get anywhere you want' is awkward after 'get a bike'; use 'to go anywhere you want' to express movement. Suggestion: streamline the phrase and choose the correct verb for motion ('go').