Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have read Bike in my child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bike is a problem in my country. In China every children have a small bike in a small.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答需要直接且自然地回应问题,使用正确的时态和词汇,并尽量提供一两句补充说明。你的句子有明显语法和词汇错误(如“have read Bike”不合适)且信息不足。建议用简单过去时说你是否有自行车,接着给出细节(例如是谁给你的、它是什么样的、你常去哪儿骑)。注意句子不要超过5句,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six — it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used to ride it to the park every weekend and learned to ride without help by the time I was eight.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不清晰且有语法错误(如“bike is a problem”意思不明,“every children”应为“every child”)。需要先直接回答问题,然后用一两条具体理由或事实支持观点,比如城市自行车使用率高、共享单车普及或儿童常骑自行车等。使用连接词(for example, because, and)使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips in cities, and shared bikes are common. Also, most children have their own small bikes and often ride them to parks or schoolyards.
× Yes, I have read Bike in my child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
问题类型:现在时态使用错误(应使用过去时) 说明:原句“I have read Bike in my child.” 时态和动词不正确。问句是过去习惯(Did you have...?),回答应使用过去时的动词“had”。另外原句中“have read”意味着“已经读过”,与语境不符;“Bike”作为可数名词需小写并加冠词或改为复数,且“in my child”是错误用法,应该是“when I was a child”(在我小时候)。建议:使用过去时态表达过去拥有,句子结构为“had a bike when I was a child”。
× Yes, I think bike is a problem in my country.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.
问题类型:单复数问题 说明:原句“bike is a problem”中“bike”被错误地用作单数且句意不通。根据考官问题“Do you think bikes are popular...?” 正确应讨论自行车是否流行。需要使用复数“bikes”以及恰当的谓语“are popular”(复数主语与复数动词一致)。建议:将主语改为复数“bikes”并使用正确形容词短语“are popular”。
× In China every children have a small bike in a small.
✓ In China every child has a small bike.
问题类型:量词/单复数使用错误与句子冗余 说明:原句有多处错误:1)“every children”错误,every后应接单数名词,正确为“every child”;2)与主语一致性的动词应为第三人称单数“has”,而不是“have”;3)“in a small”无意义,应删除;4)若想表达“每个孩子都有一辆小自行车”,可简化为“In China every child has a small bike.” 建议:使用“every + 单数名词”,并把动词改为第三人称单数形式“has”,去掉多余片语。