Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct past tense forms and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a small pink bike when I was about seven, and it had floral stickers and a little bell. I rode it around the neighborhood every day, so it was one of my favorite toys.

Gợi ý: Make the response more organized and fluent: begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and specific details (where and why). Remove hesitation and filler words, and keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, shared bikes are common on city streets and people use them to commute to work or to get around for short trips. Because they are cheap and convenient, many residents choose bikes instead of cars.

× Yes, I used to had a bike given from my parents which was a pink bike with some decorations on it.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike given to me by my parents; it was a pink bike with some decorations on it.

The phrase 'used to' requires the base form of the verb, so 'had' is incorrect; use 'have'. Also, the passive/agent structure is improved by using 'given to me by my parents'. Use a semicolon or split into two clauses to avoid a run-on. Suggestion: learn that 'used to' + base verb expresses a past habitual action (e.g., 'used to have'). Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, of course it's really normal to see sharing bikes in our country like on the streets.

✓ Yes, of course it's very common to see shared bikes on the streets in our country.

The original has awkward noun phrase 'sharing bikes' and 'it's really normal' is natural but 'very common' fits better. 'Sharing bikes' should be 'shared bikes' (adjective) or 'bike-sharing services'. Also word order 'on the streets' should follow the noun. Suggestion: use 'shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing services' and place locative phrases after the noun. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× There are many many like sharing bikes for people to hire or like for for them to no matter go to work or just for entertainment it's.

✓ There are many shared bikes for people to rent, whether to commute to work or just for recreation.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repetitions ('many many', 'like', 'for for') and filler words ('no matter', 'it's'). Use 'many shared bikes' and 'to rent' (or 'to hire') and the correlative 'whether... or' to present alternatives. Remove filler 'like' and duplicate words. Suggestion: plan the sentence structure before speaking: subject + verb + purpose (e.g., 'for people to rent, whether to commute or for recreation'). Grammar problem type ID: 11