Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more independent and fit.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think back is popular in my country because it is good for people's health.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且相关,但可以更简洁并提供更具体的细节以增强说服力。建议:①开头句保持直接(例如:Yes, I did.);②用一到两句具体例子说明如何变得更独立或更健康(如骑车上学的距离、与谁一起骑、发生过的难忘经历);③注意句子长度,最多不超过5句,并用连接词(for example, because, which)衔接信息。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I rode my bike to school every day for about three miles, often with my friend Anna. Riding alone taught me to be responsible for locking it and planning my route, and it also kept me fit because I cycled for around 30 minutes each morning.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答有语法和用词错误("back"应为"bike"),内容过于简单且缺乏具体支持。建议:①先用明确主题句(Yes, I think bikes are popular.);②给出具体原因并用连接词扩展(例如:because they are cheap, eco-friendly, and good for health);③提供数据或例子(如城市有许多自行车道、上下班骑行的人数增长、政府推广共享单车)。保持不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many cities have built dedicated cycle lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so more people commute by bike instead of driving. This trend has improved public health and reduced traffic congestion.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think back is popular in my country because it is good for people's health.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are good for people's health.

原句中将“bikes”(自行车)误写为“back”,属于用词错误并导致代词指代混乱。正确句子要用复数名词“bikes”与代词“they”一致指代复数。建议:说复数名词时用复数代词(they/them),写作时检查单词拼写是否正确,确保名词和代词在人称与数上一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Back— Rear; Reverse; Backward
Fit— Suitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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