Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and grammatically correct, use a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide specific supporting details with linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., “training” -> “training wheels”; “I very like it” -> “I liked it very much”). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small blue bike with training wheels that my father gave me when I was eight. I liked it very much because it let me ride to my friends’ houses, and I remember practicing every afternoon until I could ride without the training wheels.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., “back” -> “bikes”; avoid filler words like “uh”). Provide specific reasons and use linking words such as “because”, “for example”, or “also”. Mention concrete facts or examples to support your opinion. Keep it concise and fluent.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer them for short trips as an environmentally friendly option. For example, shared bikes that you unlock by scanning a QR code are widely available in cities, so many commuters use them to travel to work or to run errands.

× It was a blue one with two training.

✓ It was a blue one with two training wheels.

The original sentence uses 'training' as a noun incorrectly. The correct noun is 'training wheels' to describe small wheels on a child's bike. Add 'wheels' to form the noun phrase; no change of tense needed.

× Well, it is a gift from my father when I was 8 years old.

✓ Well, it was a gift from my father when I was 8 years old.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is' with a past time reference 'when I was 8 years old.' Use past tense 'was' to match the past time frame.

× I very like it and the small bike accompanied me.

✓ I liked it very much, and the small bike accompanied me.

'I very like it' is ungrammatical in English. Use past tense 'liked' with the adverbial phrase 'very much.' Also separate the two ideas with 'and,' keeping parallel past tense 'accompanied.' This corrects adverb placement and tense.

× Yes, I do think back is popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country.

'Back' is a wrong word; the intended noun is 'bikes.' Also use plural 'bikes' to match the general meaning and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'are.'

× We uh, in China, we propose like uh, environmental friendly, so uh, we can scan the QR card and then to unlock the bike so we can use it.

✓ In China we encourage environmental friendliness, so we can scan a QR code to unlock a bike and use it.

The original sentence has disfluent fillers and incorrect phrases: 'propose like environmental friendly' is ungrammatical; use 'encourage environmental friendliness' or 'promote being environmentally friendly.' 'QR card' is incorrect; the common term is 'QR code.' Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'unlock.' Reordering improves clarity and fluency.