Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, structure and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and incomplete phrases. Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 concise sentences and use relevant vocabulary (e.g., "gift," "birthday," "learned to ride").

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bright red bicycle when I finished primary school as a graduation present. Because of that gift, I learned to ride quickly and spent a lot of time cycling around the neighborhood with my friends.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent and provide specific reasons with linking words. Begin with a direct opinion, then explain 2–3 clear reasons (e.g., convenience, cost, health). Use connectors like 'because', 'for example', and 'also' to organize ideas and avoid fillers (umm, uh).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride to work or school to avoid traffic, and others use bikes for exercise and leisure on weekends.

× Yes I did I had the bike when I was a child my parents bought it for me when I graduated uh rate 5 I I like this because the.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about five. I liked it because of that.

The original is a run-on and unclear. It mixes tenses and fragments. Split into separate sentences to match meaning and tense: 'I had a bike when I was a child' (simple past), 'My parents bought it for me when I was about five' (use past tense and 'about five' for age), and 'I liked it because of that' (past simple to describe past feeling). Also remove filler words and correct 'the bike' to 'a bike' for natural reference.

× MMM, yes, I think so. Umm, my, my country had a lot of spike uh, because it is, uh, it's useful for many people go to work, uh, exercise every day and uh.

✓ Yes, I think so. My country has a lot of bicycles because they are useful for many people to go to work and exercise every day.

Errors include wrong word choice 'spike' instead of 'bikes' or 'bicycles' and incorrect verb forms. Use present simple 'has' to state a general fact about the country. Use plural 'bicycles' and plural pronoun 'they' to agree. Include 'to' before infinitives: 'to go to work' and 'to exercise'. Remove fillers and shaky hesitations. This corrects adjective/adverb and sentence structure issues and ensures subject-verb agreement.