Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify the main idea with a correct topic sentence, use simple grammar (past tense) and provide one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unrelated or unclear words. For example, start with “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child,” then add where you rode it and a short reason or memory. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon because it was the easiest way to visit my friends. For example, I remember racing down the street to the park with my brother.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples, using correct grammar and linking words. Use present simple for general facts. Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences) and avoid pronunciation mistakes reflected in spelling. For example start “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country,” then explain why and give a brief example.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, it is common to see students and market sellers riding bikes to work since they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes I have a back coin I am on beside because my country everyone by bike when he when and where he is died.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child because in my country everyone rode a bike wherever they went.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and tense errors. 'I have' should be past tense 'I had' to match 'when I was a child' (Present tense issue -> use past). 'a back coin I am on beside' is unintelligible and likely intended 'a bicycle' or 'a bike'; replace with 'a bicycle'. The clause 'because my country everyone by bike when he when and where he is died' contains incorrect pronouns and word order. Use 'in my country everyone rode a bike wherever they went' — 'in my country' is correct preposition, 'everyone' requires singular form but is naturally followed by 'rode' (past tense) and gender-neutral 'they' for 'everyone' to avoid 'he'. This fixes pronoun misuse and tense consistency. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use past tense for childhood, and use 'they' as a gender-neutral singular pronoun.

× Yes, I think barking so most popular in my country because everyone use bike when you we go to outside bike is so easy for right on the road.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because everyone uses a bike when they go out; bikes are easy to ride on the road.

Multiple problems: 'barking so most popular' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'bikes are very popular'. Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone use' should be 'everyone uses' (subject-verb agreement / third person singular). Pronoun confusion: 'you we go to outside' should be 'they go out' or 'we go out' — use 'they' to agree with 'everyone'. Article and noun form: 'use bike' -> 'uses a bike'. Word order and verb form: 'easy for right on the road' should be 'easy to ride on the road' — 'ride' is the correct verb and 'to' needed before infinitive. Overall suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everyone', use consistent pronouns, choose correct verbs ('ride'), and keep word order clear.