Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Not exactly because uh, my country haven't cycles or bike Rd.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla geliştirmeniz gerekiyor. Geçmişten bahsederken geçmiş zaman (had) kullanmalı, bir ana cümleyle doğrudan yanıt verip ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar eklemelisiniz. Ayrıca 1–2 bağlaç veya ek bilgiyle (nerede, ne sıklıkla, kimden aldığınız vb.) cümlelerinizi zenginleştirin. Örnek: “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school most days and I often rode with my friends on weekends.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school almost every day, and I often rode with my friends in the park on weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Cevabınız anlamlı ama dilbilgisi ve ifade sorunları var. Öncelikle grameri düzeltin (örneğin: "my country doesn't have many bike roads"), net bir görüş belirtin ve ardından kısa bir gerekçe verin. Bağlaçlar (because, but, however) kullanarak mantığı güçlendirin ve fazla konuşma dolgu sözcüklerinden (uh) kaçının. Önerilen yapı: kısa bir evet/hayır cümlesi + neden + bir örnek veya olası sonuç.

Ví dụ: Not really. My country doesn't have many bike lanes, so most people prefer cars for safety and convenience.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense 'had' instead of the present 'have'. Use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past. Suggestion: change present simple verbs to past simple when referring to past time frames.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Not exactly because uh, my country haven't cycles or bike Rd.

✓ Not exactly, because in my country we don't have many bicycles or bike lanes.

Multiple issues: 'my country haven't' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and pronoun use; 'country' is a singular noun and requires 'doesn't have' if kept, but better is 'we don't have' to sound natural. 'cycles or bike Rd' is incorrect vocabulary and abbreviation; 'bicycles' and 'bike lanes' are appropriate. Also add a comma after 'Not exactly' and use 'many' as a quantifier. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement (we don't have / the country doesn't have) and use standard nouns like 'bicycles' and 'bike lanes'.

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