Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep answers concise, grammatical and more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh, um) and incorrect tense/person agreements (use past tense for childhood). Also correct possessive errors (my/ their).

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small petrol-powered bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my fifth or sixth birthday, and I still keep it as a memento. It was bright red and I practiced riding it in the neighborhood every weekend.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organise ideas with linking words. Use correct subject-verb agreement and give specific reasons or examples. Avoid rambling and unclear phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences with relevant vocabulary (e.g., motorbikes, scooters, convenience, delivery).

Ví dụ: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many families own two or three bikes for commuting and running errands, and delivery riders also rely on them for quick transport.

× Yes, I have uh about when I was child, uh like a petrol bike, Uh and there's uh, my uh, I think 5th or 6th birthday. My father gave me their bike and they are still, I have their bike still have today.

✓ Yes, I had, uh, when I was a child a petrol bike. I think my father gave me the bike for my fifth or sixth birthday, and I still have it today.

Multiple present tense and tense-matching problems: the student mixes present tense 'have' with past time reference 'when I was child' and uses 'there's' incorrectly. Also 'my father gave me their bike' uses wrong pronoun and 'still have today' is duplicated. Suggestion: use past tense 'had' for possession in childhood, use 'was a child' with article 'a', use 'gave me the bike' and maintain present when indicating current possession: 'I still have it today.' Improve fluency by removing filler words and redundant phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I have uh about when I was child, uh like a petrol bike, Uh and there's uh, my uh, I think 5th or 6th birthday.

✓ Yes, I had, when I was a child, a petrol bike. I think it was for my fifth or sixth birthday.

Missing definite/indefinite article before 'child' and ordinal formatting: English requires 'a child' and 'fifth'/'sixth' usually written out in speech. Also 'there's' is unnecessary. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'child' and use 'fifth' or 'sixth' and rephrase to 'I think it was for my fifth or sixth birthday.' Grammar problem type ID: 22

× My father gave me their bike and they are still, I have their bike still have today.

✓ My father gave me his bike, and I still have it today.

The student used the plural pronouns 'their' and 'they' to refer to 'my father', which is singular. Use 'his' for a singular male antecedent and 'it' to refer to the bike. Also remove duplicated phrasing 'still have' and incorrect clause 'they are still.' Suggestion: use consistent singular pronouns and concise phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Yes, bikes are uh very popular in our country uh, I think every uh person have a bike in my country and if many of the people have two to three bikes in their home so they can easily like uh, they can bring uh little bird things like uh, when.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country. I think almost every person has a bike, and many people have two or three bikes at home, so they can easily carry small items.

Subject-verb agreement: 'every person have' is incorrect because 'every person' is singular and requires 'has'. Also 'many of the people have' is acceptable but 'many people have' is more natural. 'Bring little bird things' is unclear; likely 'carry small items' is intended. Suggestion: use singular verb with 'every', ensure noun phrases are clear, and simplify the sentence into two or three concise sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 27