Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I don't have a bike umm, because my parents think that is not very safe. So my mother always use her bike and uh, let me have a seat on her bike and go out.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country. I live in China and in China almost everyone owns a bike. Uh, because it's very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答要用正确的时态并更直接明确。注意避免过多的犹豫词(如 "umm", "uh"),并用一到两句补充细节支持主句。可以先用一句清楚的主题句说明没有自行车,然后用一两句解释原因并描述一次具体经历以增加内容丰富度。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe. Instead, my mother often rode her bike and let me sit on the back; I remember once we cycled to the park together every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答可以更自然连贯并提供更具体的原因或例子。减少重复(如两次提到 China),使用连接词使句子更流畅,并尽量使用更丰富的词汇描述流行原因(例如:经济、环保、交通便捷)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China because they are cheap, convenient and environmentally friendly. For example, many people use shared bikes for short trips in cities, which helps them avoid traffic and save money.
× No, I don't have a bike umm, because my parents think that is not very safe.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike, umm, because my parents thought that it was not very safe.
原句时态不一致。问题在于考官问的是过去(当你是孩子时),学生用现在时“don't have”和“think”表述过去情况,应使用过去时。建议将动词改为过去式:didn't have(没有),thought(认为),并在从句中把 it 引入以使结构更完整:it was not very safe。
× So my mother always use her bike and uh, let me have a seat on her bike and go out.
✓ So my mother always used her bike and, uh, let me have a seat on her bike and go out.
原句主谓一致及时态问题。句子描述过去习惯性动作,应使用过去式“used”。此外“let me have a seat on her bike and go out”结构虽可理解,但更自然的过去时并保留不变。建议用“always used”来表示过去常态。
× Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country.
✓ Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country.
该句语法正确,时态和主谓一致均无问题。只是提醒在正式写作或考试回答中可加逗号或把 'bikes' 前置冠词 'The' 视语境使用,但不属于必须修改的错误。
× I live in China and in China almost everyone owns a bike.
✓ I live in China, and in China almost everyone owns a bike.
句子语法与单复数搭配正确(everyone 后接单数动词 owns,a bike 表示每个人拥有一辆自行车),因此不需要改动。此处只是建议加入逗号以改善连贯性,但不属于列举的错误类型。
× Uh, because it's very convenient.
✓ Uh, because it's very convenient.
该短句语法正确,使用现在时描述普遍事实恰当,无需修改。