Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I do had a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in my country bikes are very popular. Like in morning for the exercise they use bike, for traveling from one place to another that they use bike, it doesn't use any fuel and it is eco friendly also.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct, concise, and provide a short supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence using the simple past (e.g. "Yes, I had a bike.") and add one brief detail about it (age, color, or where you rode it). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid mixing tenses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give two specific, linked reasons using linking words (e.g. "Firstly", "Additionally"). Use concise, natural phrasing and correct small grammar points (plural/singular, articles). Avoid repeating ideas and keep the response within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, many people ride them in the morning for exercise; additionally, others use bikes for short trips because they are fuel-free and environmentally friendly.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I do had a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The student used 'do had', which mixes present auxiliary 'do' with past verb 'had'. For simple past statements, do not use the auxiliary 'do' plus past verb. Use the past tense form alone: 'I had a bike.' Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation.

Present tense issue

× Like in morning for the exercise they use bike, for traveling from one place to another that they use bike, it doesn't use any fuel and it is eco friendly also.

✓ For example, in the morning people use bikes for exercise and to travel from one place to another; they do not use fuel and are eco-friendly.

Multiple errors: 'Like in morning' should be 'In the morning' or 'For example, in the morning' (preposition and article). 'they use bike' has singular/plural and article issues; use 'people use bikes' or 'they use bikes'. 'for traveling' should be 'to travel' to match purpose. 'that they use bike' is redundant and ungrammatical; simplify to 'and to travel from one place to another.' 'it doesn't use any fuel and it is eco friendly also' uses 'it' for bikes (plural) and awkward adverb placement; use plural pronoun 'they' and adjective 'eco-friendly', and place 'also' appropriately. Use 'do not' for formality. Overall restructure into one or two clear sentences.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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