Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I had a pink small bow bike when I was a child. I used to ride it, uh, every weekend with my friend because it was bright and comfortable for me. It was my favorite tour.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Definitely, because China is a big country, have a lot of people and we have a lot of public bikes on the street and even in some small path and it provide convenience for people who have to work every day or have to go out to have some.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 明确开头并纠正语法,减少冗余并丰富细节。比如用一句主题句直接回答,随后用一两句具体说明骑车的场景、频率和感受;注意词序(small pink bow bike 更自然)、词汇准确("tour" 不适合,用 "toy" 或 "ride"),避免语气词如 uh。
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small pink bike with a bow when I was a child. I rode it every weekend with a friend along the park paths, and I loved how bright it looked and how easy it was to ride. Those rides were my favorite childhood pastime.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回应要更简洁并使用连贯连接词,修正语法和用词(如 "have" → "has","provide" → "provides"),提供具体数据或例子会更有说服力。可以先直接回答,再用一两点具体原因或实例支持,注意句子不要过长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. For example, many cities have public bike-sharing programs and dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling a convenient option for commuters and short trips.
× Definitely, because China is a big country, have a lot of people and we have a lot of public bikes on the street and even in some small path and it provide convenience for people who have to work every day or have to go out to have some.
✓ Definitely, because China is a big country, has a lot of people and we have a lot of public bikes on the streets and even on some small paths, and they provide convenience for people who have to work every day or have to go out.
错误类型:名词单复数问题(Singular and plural issue)。 解释与改进建议(简体中文): 1) “China is a big country, have a lot of people” 中主语 China 与动词不一致,正确应为 China has a lot of people(国家作为单数主语用 has)。 2) “public bikes on the street” 中应使用复数 streets 或去掉复数视语境,但因为是泛指多条街道,改为 streets 更自然。 3) “in some small path” 中 path 应为复数 paths 或用 a path,根据语境应为多条小路,改为 paths,并且常用介词 on some small paths 更自然。 4) “it provide convenience” 中先行词为复数(public bikes),因此动词应为 provide,且主语改为 they。总结建议:注意主语的单复数并使动词形式一致;表示多处、泛指时名词常用复数形式。