Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., “I had a bike” not “I have bike”), and avoid repetition. Also improve cohesion by using linking words like “however,” “because,” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: I had a bicycle when I was a child, but I never learned to ride it. Because of that, I still can’t ride a bike now, and I’d like to learn in the future. For example, I plan to take lessons before I travel to Europe, since many cities there are bike-friendly.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and hesitations. Give a clear direct answer, then support it with specific examples or trends, using linking words like “however” or “recently.” Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “bike lanes,” “popular,” “more people”). Keep it to 1–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Overall, bikes are not very popular in my country. However, in recent years the government has built more bike lanes and promoted cycling, so more people are starting to ride for short trips and leisure.

× Yeah, I have bike, but I never try to ride bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike, but I never tried to ride it.

The sentence has multiple issues: tense and verb form (present vs past) and missing articles/pronouns but we only correct items from the provided list. The primary grammar issue from the list is item 10 (verb in the present participle form) insofar as 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match 'had' and the time frame 'when you were a child'. Use past tense for past events and include the article 'a' and the pronoun 'it' for the object: 'had a bike' and 'ride it'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and include appropriate article/pronoun.

× And so unfortunately now I can't ride bike.

✓ And so unfortunately now I can't ride a bike.

This is primarily a present tense usage issue (ID 6) combined with an article omission. The modal 'can't' correctly expresses inability now, but the noun 'bike' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Suggestion: keep present tense 'can't' and add 'a' before countable singular nouns: 'can't ride a bike'.

× But it's my wish.

✓ But it's my wish to learn.

This sentence is short and not ungrammatical by itself, but in context it lacks a clear verb phrase linking to the following idea. The issue flagged is modal verb usage (ID 4) because the speaker uses 'must' in the next sentence; to be clearer, tie the wish to the action: 'it's my wish to learn.' Suggestion: express wishes with 'wish to' plus base verb for clarity.

× One day I must learn because it's really important for me when I travel the Europe, more Europe countries use bikes.

✓ One day I must learn because it's really important for me when I travel in Europe; many European countries use bikes.

This contains a modal verb 'must' (ID 4) used correctly to express necessity, but other issues include article misuse and word order. 'the Europe' is incorrect; use 'Europe' without 'the'. 'more Europe countries' is ungrammatical — use 'many European countries'. Suggestion: keep 'must' for obligation, remove 'the' before continent names, and use 'many' + adjective form 'European' to modify 'countries'.

× Actually, no, umm, I, I, I can yeah, say no, but umm, in recently years in our country also, uh, you some uh, bike uh lines and uh, it's really to just uh, come on, they want to uh, buy clients. Come on.

✓ Actually, no, I would say no, but in recent years in our country there have also been some bike lanes, and people really want to use them.

Multiple problems: tense and aspect (ID 6) — use 'in recent years' with present perfect 'have been' for changes that started in the past and continue; 'recently years' is incorrect. 'you some bike lines' and 'buy clients' are unclear; corrected to 'some bike lanes' and 'people... want to use them.' Also add 'there' for existence (ID 3) but primary issue addressed here is present tense/aspect. Suggestion: use 'in recent years' + present perfect for ongoing developments, use correct nouns 'bike lanes', and express people's desire with 'people want to use them.'