Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you learned, who taught you, feelings) using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words, and correct grammar (use past tense for childhood).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. However, I was afraid to ride it at first, so I didn’t practice much until my older cousin patiently taught me when I was eight. After a few lessons, I became more confident and started riding every weekend.

Gợi ý: Answer directly about popularity, then give specific supporting details and use linking words. Mention who rides bikes, where they ride them, and why (e.g., transport, exercise). Use correct grammar and plural/singular agreement, and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children and commuters. For example, many of my childhood friends rode bikes to school and to the park, because it was a cheap and convenient way to get around. As a result, cycling is a common pastime and practical transport for short trips.

× Yes, I do have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Do have' is present tense; use 'did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: use simple past for past situations (I had a bike).

× I also know how to ride a bike but when I was young I I don't I don't know how to to practice bicycle because I'm so scared.

✓ I also knew how to ride a bike, but when I was young I didn't know how to practice riding a bicycle because I was so scared.

Multiple tense and auxiliary errors: the clause 'I also know' should be past 'I also knew' to match 'when I was young.' 'I don't I don't know' is incorrect repetition and wrong tense; use past negative 'I didn't know.' 'to to practice bicycle' has duplicated 'to' and incorrect noun usage; use 'practice riding a bicycle.' 'I'm so scared' should be past 'I was so scared' to match the time frame. Suggestion: keep verbs in the past when referring to childhood and avoid duplicated words.

× Probably some of my friend, my childhood friends is riding a bicycle so me as a child.

✓ Probably some of my friends, my childhood friends, were riding bicycles, and I was a child.

Several plural and agreement issues: 'some of my friend' should be 'some of my friends' (plural). The verb 'is riding' does not agree with plural subject; use 'were riding' for past continuous or 'rode' for simple past. 'a bicycle' should be 'bicycles' to match plural riders, or keep singular if referring individually. Also the clause 'so me as a child' is ungrammatical; clarify as 'and I was a child.' Suggestion: ensure noun plurality matches pronouns/verbs and maintain past tense for childhood references.

× They they invite me to to ride a bicycle.

✓ They invited me to ride a bicycle.

The repetition 'They they' and duplicated 'to' are errors. The action occurred in the past, so use past tense 'invited' rather than present 'invite.' The infinitive 'to ride a bicycle' is correct once. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and use past tense for past events.