Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid fillers (uh, umm) and finish your thought. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (who gave it, what you liked about it, one memory). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas. Keep to 2–4 sentences and vary vocabulary (precious → special/meaningful).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a birthday present, and I loved it because it let me explore the neighbourhood and feel independent. I remember riding to the park every weekend with my friends.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and reduce hesitations. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking phrases such as “mainly because” and “for example” to make your answer coherent. Use more precise vocabulary (popular → common/widely used; help the environment → reduce pollution). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very common in my country, mainly because they are cheap and eco-friendly. For example, many commuters use bicycles to avoid traffic and reduce air pollution in cities.

× Yes, of course I had a bike uh, in my childhood.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The original repeats the idea with 'in my childhood' which is awkward; 'when I was a child' is the natural past-tense phrase. Use past simple 'had' for a possession in the past. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I think it was really precious for me uh, as my father gave me as a birthday gift.

✓ I think it was really precious to me because my father gave it to me as a birthday gift.

The event is in the past so past tense is correct, but pronoun and preposition use are wrong. Use 'precious to me' not 'for me'; use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity; use 'gave it to me' rather than 'gave me'.

× That's why I usually umm, I, I.

✓ That's why I used to ride it a lot.

Original is incomplete and lacks a verb phrase. 'Used to' expresses habitual past action. Provide a complete clause with subject and verb to convey meaning.

× Yes, definitely. Uh, bikes are widely common in a country uh, the main reason is that uh, most people want to umm, help uh, environment uh, that's why most, most of people are utilizing their bikes.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are very common in my country. The main reason is that most people want to help the environment, so many people use their bikes.

Multiple issues: article use ('in a country' should be 'in my country'), word choice ('widely common' is awkward; use 'very common'), article before 'environment' is needed ('the environment'), and phrasing 'most of people' is incorrect—use 'most people' or 'many people'. Also 'utilizing' is formal and unnecessary; 'use' is natural. Split into two sentences for clarity and correct punctuation.