Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Keep the response natural, specific and within 3–5 sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention how old you were or how often you rode it, and give one short reason or memory.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because our neighborhood was small and quiet, cycling felt safe and fun.

Gợi ý: The answer gives a clear opinion but has grammatical errors, unclear phrasing and lacks coherence. To improve: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, since, as a result). Use correct tense and clearer nouns (e.g., 'the city council' or 'the government' instead of 'Ava ministry'), and avoid redundancy. Aim for 2–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, the city government painted new bike lanes two months ago, so more commuters now cycle to work. As a result, cycling has become a common and convenient way to travel.

× I think yes bike is very popular in my country and Ava ministry has been draw bicycle line before two months and now many people use bicycles which are included

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country. Ava Ministry drew bicycle lanes two months ago, and now many people use bicycles on them.

Multiple present-tense and related errors: 'I think yes bike is very popular' has incorrect article and number; 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement and 'yes' is unnecessary. 'Ava ministry has been draw bicycle line before two months' mixes present perfect continuous with base verb and wrong preposition and article/order: use simple past 'drew' or present perfect 'has drawn' with correct time expression 'two months ago' (simple past is preferable with a finished time). 'bicycle line' is unnatural; 'bicycle lanes' is correct. 'which are included' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'on them' to show people use bicycles on those lanes. Suggestions: use plural for general statements about popularity, choose appropriate tense when a specific time is given (use simple past with 'ago'), use correct noun collocations ('bicycle lanes'), and avoid unnecessary words like 'yes' in this structure.