Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember I had a bike in my child which is a sent by my grandmother.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well, I think bikes in my countries are very popular. You can see a lot of people ride bikes on the road.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法和用词错误,表达不够自然。回答应直接陈述并补充细节,注意时态和冠词,改正拼写和短语:例如用“when I was a child”而不是“in my child”,用“was sent”或“that my grandmother gave me”。建议回答不超过5句,第一句直接回答,随后用1–2句具体说明(如颜色、用途或感受),并使用连接词如“and”或“because”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a child my grandmother gave me a small red bike, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend because it made me feel free.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达总体清楚但有数个小错误和啰嗦。注意单复数和冠词(“in my country”),以及更自然的动词形式(“people riding bikes”或“many people ride bikes”)。可以加一两个具体细节支持观点,例如常见人群、使用场景或原因,并用连接词如“because”或“for example”。保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and shopkeepers often ride bikes in cities since they are cheap and convenient.
× Yes, I remember I had a bike in my child which is a sent by my grandmother.
✓ Yes, I remember I had a bike in my childhood which was a gift from my grandmother.
问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)和过去分词/被动结构(ID 9/21)混合。原句中“in my child”应为“in my childhood”(名词形式),并且“which is a sent by my grandmother”结构不正确:动词“send”的过去分词是“sent”,但此处需要被动语态“was sent”或更常用的“a gift from my grandmother”。建议改为“which was a gift from my grandmother”或更自然的“which was given to me by my grandmother”。注意时态应与“remember I had”一致使用过去式。建议:记住儿童时期常用“childhood”,表达被赠送用“was a gift from”或“was given to me by”。
× Well, I think bikes in my countries are very popular.
✓ Well, I think bikes in my country are very popular.
问题类型:主谓一致/单复数错误(ID 27 和 ID 1)。原句中“countries”为复数,但上下文指代单一国家,应使用单数“country”。同时短语“bikes in my country are very popular”中主语与动词一致为复数(bikes ... are),结构正确。建议:确认指代的是单个国家时使用单数“country”;若指多个国家则保留复数并调整上下文。
× You can see a lot of people ride bikes on the road.
✓ You can see a lot of people riding bikes on the road.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 形式错误(ID 8)。在“see + 人 + 动词”结构中,若表示看到整个动作过程通常用现在分词(seeing someone doing something)的形式,所以应使用“people riding”。也可以用不带 -ing 的不定式表达观察到完整动作(see people ride)但更自然的口语写法是“see people riding”。建议在“see”后面跟表示正在进行动作的动词时使用动名词形式。