Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did had a bike when I was growing up.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are usually used for deliveries here in my country.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and make the answer more natural and slightly more informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, use the simple past tense correctly: "Yes, I had a bike." Then add when or how you used it. Use a linking word if you add another detail (e.g., "and", "so").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was growing up. I used it almost every day to visit friends and go to the park, and it helped me become more independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then add specific supporting details with a linking word to explain why you think that. Use a wider range of vocabulary (e.g., "common", "widely used") and be specific about contexts where bikes are popular (deliveries, commuting, leisure). Keep it concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially for delivery services. In many cities couriers use motorbikes and bicycles because they are cheap and can navigate traffic more easily.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I did had a bike when I was growing up.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was growing up.

The student used 'did had' which is incorrect because when forming a simple past affirmative sentence, the auxiliary 'did' is not used; instead the past form of the verb alone is used. Use 'I had' for correct past tense. Suggestion: say 'I had' for simple past statements and use 'Did you have...?' only for questions.

Present tense issue

× Yes, bikes are usually used for deliveries here in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are usually used for deliveries in my country.

The original sentence is understandable but contains an unnecessary word 'here' that can be omitted for a more natural sentence. The present simple passive 'are used' is correct for habitual actions. Suggestion: remove redundant words and say 'in my country' rather than 'here in my country' for clarity and conciseness.

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