Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was young. I really want to have a bike. But my friends don't have enough money so I'm very sad.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think back up popular in my country because many people experience bye bye bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏直接性和語法準確性,內容不夠具體也有邏輯錯誤。建議:1) 直接以主題句回答(有或沒有),並用一兩句具體細節支持,如誰擁有、什麼樣的自行車、何時開始騎。2) 注意時態和主謂一致(過去時表達童年經歷)。3) 使用連接詞(because, so, but)使句子連貫且不要自相矛盾。4) 保持答案在3–5句內,自然且不冗長。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood. I especially liked riding with my older cousin because he taught me tricks. Because of that, I developed a lifelong love of cycling.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答語言不清楚並有多處錯誤(詞彙和表達混亂),內容過於籠統且缺乏具體例證。建議:1) 用清晰的主題句直接回答(Yes/No),接着用具體原因或例子支持(例如通勤、休閒、城市政策)。2) 使用恰當詞彙(popular, common, widely used, commute)。3) 提供一兩個具體細節或比較(例如在城市中心比鄉村更普遍,或政府有自行車道)。4) 保持語法正確,句子連貫。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. In recent years the government has built more bike lanes, which has encouraged even more people to cycle.
× Yes, when I was young. I really want to have a bike. But my friends don't have enough money so I'm very sad.
✓ Yes, when I was young. I really wanted to have a bike. But my family didn't have enough money so I was very sad.
句子中谈论过去发生的事情(“当我小的时候”),动词应使用过去时。原句“You really want”应为“really wanted”;此外,根据上下文,学生自己没有自行车的原因更可能是“家里没有足够的钱(my family didn't have enough money)”而不是“我的朋友们(my friends)”,原句用现在时“don't have”和现在状态“I'm very sad”也必须改成过去时“didn't have”和“I was very sad”。建议:在描述过去经历时,整体使用过去时(例如:wanted, didn't have, was)。
× Yes, I think back up popular in my country because many people experience bye bye bike.
✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because many people ride bikes.
原句结构混乱且包含无法识别的短语“back up popular”和“experience bye bye bike”。应使用主语+系动词+表语结构表达“自行车很受欢迎”(bicycles are popular)。同时,表示“骑自行车”应使用动词短语“ride bikes”。建议:用简单清晰的句子表达观点,例如“Bicycles are popular because many people ride bikes.”